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Priceless911 — lieZ in Reverse

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Published: 2014-12-18 22:28:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1079; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 0
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Description

Name:
True: Zeil
False: Zine 
Species:
True: Changeling
False: Zebra
Age: 22
Talent:
True: Deception
False: none
Personality:
True: Crafty, loyal, Deceptive.
False: Shy, Sensitive, and Kind.

 

His name is Zine or so he says.
A zebra from afar, or so he claims.
casts aside for no mark, or so he states.
Seeking a teacher, or so he declares.

However…

Everything he says, claims, states, and declares… is a Lie…

His true motives, name, and presence are unknown but to himself and himself alone. However, there is one thing he says that is true. He is falling in love with one who knows not his true self. But can one so different, truly fall in love. Or is this too, a claim that will forever remain false.

His name is Zine… or so he says…

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Well here, he is, The main Character of my next story, “Never Meant To Be” his true name is Zeil, he is a changeling who assisted in the infiltration of the Canterlot Royal Wedding. However when the plan fails, he finds himself wounded and alone until he fools Zecora into saving his life, however as feelings between him and the enchantress grow, he will soon find himself to be the real fool.

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Comments: 21

EQ7-2521 [2016-10-10 07:16:56 +0000 UTC]

I needed to stare at the name for a full minute before I "got it"...

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Priceless911 In reply to EQ7-2521 [2016-10-11 22:06:56 +0000 UTC]

lol most people didn't so I actually put it in the story. when Zeil met Chief Rafi in a vision.

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EQ7-2521 In reply to Priceless911 [2016-10-11 22:13:32 +0000 UTC]

Really? Seeing it now, it would look like something a solid chunk of the viewers would notice off the bat, but I guess not.

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Priceless911 In reply to EQ7-2521 [2016-10-12 03:16:00 +0000 UTC]

true but some people don't pay too much attention to the title, they mainly focus on the image

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EQ7-2521 In reply to Priceless911 [2016-10-12 03:31:47 +0000 UTC]

That is true. A lot of intricate details and hints can go into character and raw textual information.

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GERsuperMAN [2015-01-04 05:56:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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Priceless911 In reply to GERsuperMAN [2015-01-04 07:48:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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WolfTheWyvern [2014-12-21 03:38:55 +0000 UTC]

Cool! A changeling who's  a pathological liar. Makes a good bit of sense actually...

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Priceless911 In reply to WolfTheWyvern [2014-12-21 16:56:27 +0000 UTC]

true but the story will set more on his reasons rather then just his lies

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WolfTheWyvern In reply to Priceless911 [2014-12-21 18:28:48 +0000 UTC]

Well of course. Do you publish your stories here in dA?

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Priceless911 In reply to WolfTheWyvern [2014-12-21 19:00:26 +0000 UTC]

yep here and on FIMFiction although this story wont be started for a few weeks. first im gonna finish my current story which has about 4 chapters left, then im gonna find an artist to make the cover art for this one.

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WolfTheWyvern In reply to Priceless911 [2014-12-21 21:14:34 +0000 UTC]

Cool, what's your username on FiMfic? I'd like to look you up there.

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Priceless911 In reply to WolfTheWyvern [2014-12-21 21:17:21 +0000 UTC]

same as here, Priceless911 www.fimfiction.net/user/Pricel…

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JD-jump [2014-12-19 00:55:01 +0000 UTC]

oh wow I just saw the shadow Nice Job on this one  

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Priceless911 In reply to JD-jump [2014-12-19 17:17:39 +0000 UTC]

believe it or not, the shadow was the easy part. it was the rest of the image that took the longest.
Thanks

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JD-jump In reply to Priceless911 [2014-12-19 20:32:00 +0000 UTC]

oh wow

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RBDoucette [2014-12-19 00:01:47 +0000 UTC]

Niiiice. Looking forward to it, had hope I am able to understand the story.

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Priceless911 In reply to RBDoucette [2014-12-19 17:18:28 +0000 UTC]

this will be my hardest to write since the main characters are Zine/Zeil and Zecora.

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Kiddan [2014-12-18 22:38:36 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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Priceless911 In reply to Kiddan [2014-12-21 19:07:12 +0000 UTC]

Thx

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Kiddan In reply to Priceless911 [2014-12-24 16:54:58 +0000 UTC]

 

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