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Description A young Legolas and his pet wolfxwarg Floof :3

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art (C) AgentWhiteHawk 2014
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SnakeSite [2014-12-19 23:33:24 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

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Technique

Impact


First of all, This is simply amazing. I love the sketch and especially the wolf. Though the scribbles is a little off. I think that you did good but I excpect better.
second of all, It doe snot make sense to me what position the girl is in?
I looked at this and I turned my head at the girls legs. Like what the?
You should do a little better on that. The wolves legs and, is it supposed to have little fur?
This drawing is 70% good and 30% Ewww
Yes I know it is a sketch but still...

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SnakeSite In reply to SnakeSite [2014-12-20 15:14:54 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Indeed I know this but I was just trying to give you advice?
I was not at all trying to be rude or anything. I love how you draw humans and wolves. Really, I do and I can't even draw humans XD
So your drawings to me are the best, though I saw a critique and was like...Why not?
I have seen all of them, not lying o you. Yes I know what Legolas is and about Floof...
He looks adorable!There's no other little bundle of cuteness!

Though that I know that this was a sketch and was NOT Β trying to be rude what so ever. Plus, I did not know that the critique was a accident? I was just a giving a little advice. Otherwise this sketch is perfection! I love it in all ways.
I also love Legolas's face. He is so cute and the wolf is awesome!
You did a great job on this random sketch. In fact, You do great jobs on all of your artworks! There's nothing that I can say greater than that. Wait...Yes I can...
Your artworks are epic!
Even this random practice sketch!
and yes, I promise to be more respectful with my critiques. Though this was the first critique I have ever done so...I am sorry.
I just didn't really get the idea so I just tried it out*shrug*
Though I do promise to be more respectful.
Next time I won't use "ewwww" either .-.
I am sorry.

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ZoeyBeeCee In reply to SnakeSite [2014-12-21 01:56:59 +0000 UTC]

I say give it time but that's just my opinion. Β It's really good for a sketch, and who knows we might get to see it inked/pixelated?/colored in? Β It's good to give advice about things, and I am probably pretty terrible about critiques anyways since I tend to try to ask more questions...but hey, it's your thing and I wouldn't want to squash it
We all start somewhere and maybe it might get fleshed out? Β I'm kinda wondering if it's her doggy coming home after Papa got a kill for the tribe? Β (Since it looks like the person is wearing some tribal stuff, and my own stories are getting in the way of my judgement).

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SnakeSite In reply to ZoeyBeeCee [2014-12-21 03:17:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for this information!
It will help a lot!

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ZoeyBeeCee In reply to SnakeSite [2014-12-21 16:45:22 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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SnakeSite In reply to ZoeyBeeCee [2014-12-21 18:27:57 +0000 UTC]

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ZoeyBeeCee In reply to ZoeyBeeCee [2014-12-21 01:58:26 +0000 UTC]

Total derping on the picture, sorry

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PricklyAlpaca In reply to SnakeSite [2014-12-20 09:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you
Firstly this drawing actually wasn't supposed to have the critique requesting feature on it, when I submit a deviation it automatically selects it and I forgot to unselect it.Β 
But yeah, this was a simple 15 minute sketch to warm up, if I was focusing on the anatomy and perfecting it a bit more I would had done so. I'm well aware of my shortcomings in human and canine anatomy and I continue to work on them, specifically in my more serious work.Β 

There are some reasons for how Legolas and Floof look like they do (also Legolas is a male elf child in this, though you kind of have to know the Lord of the Rings fandom yeah to know that.)Β Β Floof is a young pup in this drawing and his fur isn't fully grown in. Wargs get to be a large size so I imagine their anatomy can be developed this much at a young age. Though, yeah, Legolas's legs are very off in this drawing. I was doodling and ran into you proportional problems so I had to make due. I wasn't aiming for perfection here, just practice.Β 

Lastly, in future would you mind being a bit more respectful in your critiques? All the artists on this site work very hard on their artwork and when guidance is needed people tend to respond better to specifics and constructive criticism than "ewww."Β 
Thank you for taking the time to review my artwork though, it is appreciated.Β 

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ZoeyBeeCee In reply to PricklyAlpaca [2014-12-21 02:07:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm wondering if this is an automatic feature, the critique option already filled in? Β It's a great sketch, and I've had my own questions about it, more about the background than the actual drawing, but my brain is going on auto-pilot from all of the Disturbed I've been listening to

In hindsight I should have read YOUR post before I read Snakesite's post. Β But I say again, I am willing to give it time and if you are passionate about this sketch as I am sure you are passionate about a great deal of your artwork, the sketch will go where it is meant to go (though I hinted at fleshing out and colored in : P)

I can't say you have "shortcomings" since you seem to hammer out some pretty convincing artwork anyways, but I did get a little confused at the vestment? Β At first I saw "tribal" (and I will confess I did see that Korra and Iroh(?) drawing first). Β And I just had a question of the elf kid in the picture in that I was wondering if the aging was similar to human children? Β It's a REALLY dumb question and you don't have to answer any of them, I was just wondering if that was what you were going for with the sketch? Β It wouldn't make me feel so bad with that judgement to think that kids grow into their bodies be them elven, dwarven, human, orcish or otherwise.

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TwigKing [2015-01-04 17:58:05 +0000 UTC]

ew son no
stop being adorable
xD
gosh darn floof not you tooΒ 

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PricklyAlpaca In reply to TwigKing [2015-01-04 22:25:01 +0000 UTC]

SUCKKK ITTT
SUCK IT ALL IN
IM FABULOUS, ADA

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TwigKing In reply to PricklyAlpaca [2015-01-21 00:02:12 +0000 UTC]

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
I DONT NEED YOUR SASS

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PricklyAlpaca In reply to TwigKing [2015-01-21 00:06:45 +0000 UTC]

UR GONNA GET IT ANYWAY ADA

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TwigKing In reply to PricklyAlpaca [2015-01-21 00:14:42 +0000 UTC]

HOW DARE

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PricklyAlpaca In reply to TwigKing [2015-01-23 18:04:38 +0000 UTC]

YES I WENT THERE ADA
AND BACK AGAIN

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TwigKing In reply to PricklyAlpaca [2015-02-27 05:03:40 +0000 UTC]

WWWOOOOOOOOWWWWW
YOU ARE GROUNDED

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PricklyAlpaca In reply to TwigKing [2015-02-27 05:09:55 +0000 UTC]

NOPE

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ZoeyBeeCee [2014-12-21 01:48:24 +0000 UTC]

D'aww puppy!

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PricklyAlpaca In reply to ZoeyBeeCee [2014-12-22 16:46:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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ZoeyBeeCee In reply to PricklyAlpaca [2014-12-22 16:50:26 +0000 UTC]

It's a cute puppy and sorry for derping on the critique comment : ( Β 

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Tienala [2014-12-20 09:01:34 +0000 UTC]

ohmygooosshhhh, too cute!!

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PricklyAlpaca In reply to Tienala [2014-12-20 09:34:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Tienala In reply to PricklyAlpaca [2014-12-20 09:37:27 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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uniccin [2014-12-20 00:31:12 +0000 UTC]

d'awww, that's so cuuute ;_;
*joins the hug*

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PricklyAlpaca In reply to uniccin [2014-12-20 01:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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uniccin In reply to PricklyAlpaca [2014-12-20 03:17:59 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome :3

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gdpr-26018953 [2014-12-19 23:57:48 +0000 UTC]

I love the sketches too:3 Awesome job.

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PricklyAlpaca In reply to gdpr-26018953 [2014-12-20 00:01:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Mewn-san [2014-12-19 23:52:31 +0000 UTC]

XD he looks so precious
have you seen the new hobbit movie yet btw?

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PricklyAlpaca In reply to Mewn-san [2014-12-20 00:01:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
And no, not yet, I'm going tomorrow

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Mewn-san In reply to PricklyAlpaca [2014-12-20 00:19:42 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!
I'm seeing it tomorrow too after community service because my school requires way too much TT_TT

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WolfsMelody [2014-12-19 23:51:48 +0000 UTC]

awe!

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PricklyAlpaca In reply to WolfsMelody [2014-12-20 00:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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WolfsMelody In reply to PricklyAlpaca [2014-12-20 00:18:17 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome~

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gdpr-19899093 [2014-12-19 23:26:25 +0000 UTC]

Awwww adorable Loving the sketches

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PricklyAlpaca In reply to gdpr-19899093 [2014-12-20 00:00:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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gdpr-19899093 In reply to PricklyAlpaca [2014-12-20 18:41:14 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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TwigKing [2014-12-19 23:22:41 +0000 UTC]

sON NO THAT IS NOT ALLOWED

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PricklyAlpaca In reply to TwigKing [2014-12-20 00:00:23 +0000 UTC]

YES IT IS
FLOOF IS MY FLUFFY

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TwigKing In reply to PricklyAlpaca [2015-01-04 18:01:11 +0000 UTC]

NOPE

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PricklyAlpaca In reply to TwigKing [2015-01-04 22:20:44 +0000 UTC]

YAS

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TwigKing In reply to PricklyAlpaca [2015-01-05 05:49:51 +0000 UTC]

NAH

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