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This is for contestName: Perfectus
Species: Ximon Kao-ell (a play on of Simon Cowell)
Planet: Neosgardia
Planet Description: Neosgardia is a white-cyran planet that is in an perfect allignment with their several moons, Ximon Kao-ell's cities are mostly persian styled but the height of their buildings are all the same perfect height. Ximon Kao-ell's are completley obsessed on making anything completley perfect, making them known as 'Extreme Perfectionists' of the Universe, they have what we call Obsessiveβcompulsive disorder. All Ximon Kao-ells train themselves to utmost perfection (sometimes through meditation) in almost anything from such as fighting, knowledge, daily life ect. They are also very judgemental and sometimes not very emotional. They have very unique body structure which is between of thin & sturdy, also their bodies are very flexible, able to twist their bodies with amazing flexibility which is sometimes considered impossible to do. Ximon Kao-ell's ruler is known as the 'Emperor of Perfection' who is considered to be the ultimate perfect being.
Ximon Kao-ell's perfectionism can be their deadliest ability, giving them great perfection in fighting and it gives them the ability to find stress point detection in anything, enabling them to strike at the weak points of their target.
POWERS/ABILITIES:
- Pefection in physical skills (its like giving 100% into everything you do, like perfect accuracy, perfect strategy, perfect erm...cooking Nachos & Fajitas?
)- Flexibility
- Weak Point Detection
- can run as fast as an olympic runner
WEAKNESSES:
- Being a perfectionist will make him intend to be obsessed on everything in perfect balance. EVERYTHING!
He will get really upset or really angry at himself, or at someone or something for not being in perfect order. Sometimes he will break down upon seeing anything off even by the slightest measurement
- His body being made flexible makes him not very durable or strong
- gets distracted by anything he see's perfect or not perfect
- very judgmental
- Not always emotional most of the time
- fearful for being imperfect or useless
- He won't fight anything that he considers perfect
- He gets really sick from Platinum
- If he pushes himself too extremely hard, he will faint and be out for a long while
Voice actor: Derek Stephen Prince
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Comments: 16
I imagine this guy being percieved as a bad guy at first.
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Hmm, and intriguing alien with an intriguing set of powers. I'm really digging the the blue and black color scheme. It might be interesting to expand upon the subjectivity of "perfection". Perfection could really only exist if there was nothing else for comparison. If there was one apple in the entire existence of the universe, it would be deemed the perfect apple. No one would be able to compare it to another apple, and therefore, some form of singular perfection would be had. If there are two options of anything, it is up to each individual to decide which one of those is the "perfect" (or more perfect) one. So what's "perfect" for this alien may not be perfect for those around him. Perhaps his perfect idea of strength is to actually to be very weak, (for some reason, wherever he was from weakness was more highly regarded than super strength) This sort of dichotomy between what this alien species considers perfection and what humans consider perfection, could lead to some hilarious situations! All the while, he could retain his powerfulness because sometime his idea of "perfection" might line up with what humans commonly believe. In my personal opinion, perfection doesn't really exist, but the pursuit for it still goes on in humanity (and in this case perfectusity).
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Just a little Ben 10 alien philosophy for fun
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Well..you used the Word perfect a lot that's a start.
Don't you think that it's to powerful? And only have a few weaknesses?
And what's on it's head?
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Right ok, so what do you suggest I should change on his powers? Also he's wearing a natural bone helmet, I got inspired by this [link]
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i know that dude! my sisters love that show hes on!XD i don't know why though... he looks creepy...but then again, so are my sisters!!
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It's up to you but I suggest you need to make him weaker, and if
it's to Strong better make a stronger weakness, for example "Alien X".
His power has a deadly price.
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i like all the detail you put in that says you have much potential
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pretty cool, dude. But I've seen better.Still, keep up the good work.its creative, But you should give him a asset other than slightly superhuman strength. If you turn out more work, i would like to see it. By the way, I'm a Ben 10 expert, so if you turn out any more work, id be happy to critique it, if you don't mind.
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Thanks for that 
Also I would love it for you to critique it ^^
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Well, I guess you have a point. Knowing your enemy's weak spots is a terrifically useful ability, and i almost overlooked that. also, the perfectionist thing is good because it can be a terrific power, but also a debilitating weakness. all in all, i like how you did this. It's creative and powerful. But, like all heroes need, he has weaknesses. And thanks for letting me critique your work. I would like to see any new work you make
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