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Published: 2008-04-20 14:14:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 2389; Favourites: 78; Downloads: 5
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People ask what you doBut I wont say a thing
You said I must keep my silence
As long as I wear your ring.
I deserved you to hurt me
But you don't need your fist
Next time I'll do it myself
A razor to my wrist
It's hard for me to think.
Inside I'm all confused
People say that you're bad
But it's me. I'm bad. I'm bruised.
It's not abuse
You just get a bit out of hand
It's okay really. I won't tell.
I understand.
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You don't deserve it, nobody does. I'm sorry if you've experienced enough abuse to understand it and convey the feelings so well.
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But it's me. I'm bad. I'm bruised.
>this part stuck out to me. because that's what he always tells me.
thank you for making this.
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we are strong fear is pur minimize and lord is our yeast
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what are we, we cant call the police show them the scar dont listen to excuse he just dont wanna get caught dont blame your self blame him not you be mercy less abuser dont fight fair the make lies
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That's really sad...I relate totally and know the pain this poem screams of. Nevertheless, I like it.
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Aww, that's... kinda sad... But it's good though.
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I'm not a fan of the last two lines of the first stanza. But after that... wow.
Raw and emotional. You have a great talent.
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Very sad and raw, but it a good way. Like. . .I dunno. It's real. Relatable.
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I've seen this happen before,and I think this relates what the abused feel well.
I like it
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