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Published: 2009-12-26 02:00:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 575; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 24
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Description Question: Do you know someone who stupid enough to submit a pic in summer theme instead of winter and even with no correlation with christmas?

Answer: me.

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Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

enjoy your holiday folks!
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Comments: 33

TheSoulGuardian [2009-12-26 04:21:32 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Honestly it looks awesome, so it took me a minute to figure out something to critique about. But I think the chest on the dude is a little low. Add the bottom defining lines just a little higher. But other than that, it looks great. They all look really bored though. nice. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
Annnd aparently I need to add more words before it will let me make the critique. So here it goes... You did a really great job on the coloring in this one. I think you should make the lines on the draw strings of the swimming shorts a little darker, so they pop out more and don't look like they are flat on the swimming shorts surface.
Merry xmas.

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PrizzLuna In reply to TheSoulGuardian [2009-12-28 08:38:30 +0000 UTC]

oh yes you are right
when i look at it closely, the boy's chest is a bit low, yeah

i should learn how to draw human anatomy more

thank you for your critique, i really appreciate it

merry christmas to you too!

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TheSoulGuardian In reply to PrizzLuna [2009-12-29 00:21:54 +0000 UTC]

No problem ^_^

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danicp23 [2010-01-03 01:55:19 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful, I love it!!

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PrizzLuna In reply to danicp23 [2010-01-03 22:39:58 +0000 UTC]

aawww thanks!

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AiryIsMoo [2009-12-28 05:41:19 +0000 UTC]

it'z awsme sizta .

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PrizzLuna In reply to AiryIsMoo [2009-12-28 08:40:58 +0000 UTC]

halah
makasih yaaa

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AiryIsMoo In reply to PrizzLuna [2009-12-28 09:49:42 +0000 UTC]

sama2 . . . .

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kuran-yuki [2009-12-27 01:55:25 +0000 UTC]

awesome!!

realy
it drawing dont have any problen I think Its so cute
great job!! really you dont need to put critique

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PrizzLuna In reply to kuran-yuki [2009-12-28 08:47:00 +0000 UTC]

awwwww you always so sweet
thank you so much Im having difficulty at the background, always

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kuran-yuki In reply to PrizzLuna [2010-01-02 00:14:34 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks

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Sycthecno [2009-12-26 13:31:37 +0000 UTC]

always cool, prizz-san , wuduuh, yg kiri ~~

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PrizzLuna In reply to Sycthecno [2009-12-28 08:48:39 +0000 UTC]

halah makasih
gambarmu jg semakin bagus lho!
emang yg kiri knapa?

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Sycthecno In reply to PrizzLuna [2009-12-28 09:49:48 +0000 UTC]

ehehehehe..... *malu mode : on

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Husniarsyah [2009-12-26 11:05:06 +0000 UTC]

`Anatomy` nya udah bagus ...

saran saya,
kontur otot di tonjolkan lebih bagus,
misal, kamu kan udah paham proporsi badan manusia,

untuk yang lebih advanced nya,
kamu bisa coba memahami volume tulang dan pengaruh nya terhadap pergerakan otot nya,
reverensi nya bisa melihat manusia berjalan, berlari, duduk..
kamu bisa amati, waktu seseorang mengangkat tangan nya ke atas, otot bisep nya menonjol dimana, begitu juga begitu tangan nya di tekuk,
pada dasar nya, otot laki-laki dan perempuan sama, yang membedakan anatomy dasar nya saja,
(bukan konteks pornografi yah, tapi kalo kamu mau lebih jago emang gitu, hehe..)


efek nya berpengaruh pada hasil gambar kamu,
yah..tapi udah bagus kok..


keep the good work !

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PrizzLuna In reply to Husniarsyah [2009-12-28 08:51:17 +0000 UTC]

huum aq ga bs bikin org yg berotot kk
apalagi co berotot *langsung mikir Taylor Lautner*
*ditendang ke laut*

haha makasih ya kk

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Husniarsyah In reply to PrizzLuna [2009-12-29 15:24:03 +0000 UTC]

haha,

iya sama-sama..

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RyuzakichiKun [2009-12-26 08:23:33 +0000 UTC]

Nice!!
I love those colors! 8D

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PrizzLuna In reply to RyuzakichiKun [2009-12-28 08:51:45 +0000 UTC]

aaawww thank you ryuzakichi-chaaaan

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Wormnine [2009-12-26 06:22:31 +0000 UTC]

Omg this is so great!!! So summer, sexy and warm and full of joy!

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PrizzLuna In reply to Wormnine [2009-12-28 08:54:28 +0000 UTC]

awwww thank you so much!
feel like summer all the year here only two season in my country, dry season and rainy season

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Wormnine In reply to PrizzLuna [2009-12-29 10:28:59 +0000 UTC]

Yes so its summer... It is the best really!!!

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seiryuuden [2009-12-26 03:27:46 +0000 UTC]

(ngakak liad artist commentnya...lucu!)
aduhhh lun klo gmbr mata keren yahh~~ *v*
saiaa sukaa liad matanya! X3

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PrizzLuna In reply to seiryuuden [2009-12-28 08:57:33 +0000 UTC]

haha, ga da ide bwt bikin gambar natal aq

wew dipuji sama kin-chaaan
makasih kin...!

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seiryuuden In reply to PrizzLuna [2010-01-02 12:07:57 +0000 UTC]

ihihiy! kembalii~~ XP

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Aragali [2009-12-26 02:33:39 +0000 UTC]

so pretty, in my country is summer ;D nice colors ^^

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PrizzLuna In reply to Aragali [2009-12-28 08:59:19 +0000 UTC]

wow really? where do you live?
in my country there is only two season, dry season and rainy season

awww thank you!

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Aragali In reply to PrizzLuna [2009-12-28 15:21:24 +0000 UTC]

i live in Southamerica,Chile ;D

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CelestinaGrey [2009-12-26 02:29:54 +0000 UTC]

Whooo summer!! There's no problem submitting it in winter. Some people need the sunshine. ^-^ Great job, it looks wonderful! Makes me want to go have some fun at the beach!

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PrizzLuna In reply to CelestinaGrey [2009-12-28 09:00:11 +0000 UTC]


awwww thank you so much!

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April-Lily [2009-12-26 02:13:33 +0000 UTC]

No matter if you submitted it in winter or summer, it looks awesome!

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PrizzLuna In reply to April-Lily [2009-12-28 09:00:39 +0000 UTC]


awwwwww thank you!

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April-Lily In reply to PrizzLuna [2009-12-28 20:43:50 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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