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Saiyanjedi [2015-11-18 23:21:42 +0000 UTC]
Indeed, great work tying them all into one another. And it seems that the plot is thickening as well, what with the girls discovering that their 'dream' wasn't really a dream, though if the aliens had cleaned up what they left behind fluttershy wouldn't have gone off to check, and now put their plans in jeoperdy. And of course what the aliens or strange creatures are up to in their plot, especially since each girl got a different sort of bug to handle them. Gotta admit, I do like that fluttershy got well, an egg carrier, would be interesting to see some of them hatch and spread to other ponies, can't say no to more ponies getting their navels bugged, though I suspect Twilight will have taken care of their bugs before that happens, or maybe not, it's all up to you. Also, Fluttershy having a thing for her belly button, I like the sound of that. Either way, great work on another part, this is getting more and more exciting. Curious to see if the rest of the mane 6 will be getting bugged to, and how they will eventually tie into the story and the plot of this mysterious alien race.
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ProfPanzerschreck In reply to Saiyanjedi [2015-11-19 04:18:58 +0000 UTC]
Well thank you, your feedback really means a lot. I definitely plan on doing the other mane six and plan on giving them all different bugs. I'll also plan on tying in all their stories together, hopefully in their own unique ways.
As for Fluttershy's bug, you've definitely got some really good ideas there. I might not be able to fit all of it into another chapter of this story, but it could make its way into something I do after the abduction series.
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Saiyanjedi In reply to ProfPanzerschreck [2015-11-20 11:07:42 +0000 UTC]
That's alright, I don't mind if it's just focused on the mane 6, cause it'd likely get far more complicated having to tie in more background and side characters and making sure it all fit within the setting you're building up here. Would be interesting if they were treated as say small separate one-shots in some way. Such as say various side and background characters getting bugged perhaps thanks to fluttershy's bug, it has the connection to the mane story, but they're each treated separately from it and don't in the end affect it, being simply fun side stories with no baring on the plot you have going on here. That also makes me wonder, of characters outside of the mane 6 who would you be most interested in seeing be bugged.
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ProfPanzerschreck In reply to Saiyanjedi [2015-11-20 23:28:34 +0000 UTC]
Ya, something like Fluttershy's bug or some other bugs escaping could help fuel some side one-shots, give the bugs a chance to stalk their own prey. As for choosing a side character, Minuette has always been a personal favorite of mine.
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johnraimi [2015-11-16 05:08:05 +0000 UTC]
Excellent tie into all 3 man!
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ProfPanzerschreck In reply to johnraimi [2015-11-16 08:42:23 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, hopefully I'll be able to do it with the other chapters as well.
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