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Proxicon β€” A Field of Dreams
Published: 2006-03-20 03:16:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 189; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description I open my eyes and what do I see?
A place as soothing as a still winter’s day.
A stream flows through the serene place
I follow it for what feels like miles.
At the end, there lies a rushing waterfall
Where children play, swim, and laugh.
Nothing but lion cubs without a care.
A rainbow of colors, races, religions,
Beliefs, hopes, dreams, and fears.
I watch for what feels like
Days, months, maybe years.
Never once do they fight or argue.
In peace they live as they grow older.
Centuries pass, and still no conflict.
What is the secret to this amazing feat?
These people see past what only the eye sees.
They use something else, granted to all.
They use the mind, what they have learned
To truly judge a person good or evil.
But where is this harmonious field, this Garden of Eden?
Alas, it is only in a dream.
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Comments: 22

nwfairy [2006-09-26 04:50:03 +0000 UTC]

Its so pretty... ku...

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Proxicon In reply to nwfairy [2006-09-27 02:19:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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rejectedpaintartist [2006-07-11 04:26:08 +0000 UTC]

some times that is how I feel too, its a very wonderful poem, if only people could be a little more mature....

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Proxicon In reply to rejectedpaintartist [2006-07-11 04:26:44 +0000 UTC]

I hear you there...

Maybe someday they will be?

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TheBlueShadow [2006-03-28 01:34:35 +0000 UTC]

one: you're a stalker
two: you are a decent poetry writer
three: i'm watching you...

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ZenZen-Kun [2006-03-23 03:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Nuuuu! Come back, field of dreaaaaaaaaaams!

It's splendid; I love the flow of it. Tell me what you get on it.

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Proxicon In reply to ZenZen-Kun [2006-03-23 22:28:30 +0000 UTC]

'kays, thanks!

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SkydivingNinja [2006-03-22 14:24:08 +0000 UTC]

A devart poem with no angst?
A girl who doesn't like chocolate?
NOTHING MAKES SENSE ANYMORE!

You know what this means?

I CAN FLY!
*falls to his death*

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TheBlueShadow In reply to SkydivingNinja [2006-03-28 01:33:22 +0000 UTC]

rotglhao....so funny......yet so true!

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Proxicon In reply to SkydivingNinja [2006-03-22 21:52:59 +0000 UTC]

*shifty eyes*

*takes money*

*slinks away slowly*

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AzizrianDaoXrak [2006-03-21 00:45:12 +0000 UTC]

meesa likes it ^^
wootness for that english assignment
i really like the concept of this poem

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Proxicon In reply to AzizrianDaoXrak [2006-03-21 22:22:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^.^

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xShadowfoxX [2006-03-20 14:24:09 +0000 UTC]

YOu finally submitted something else
*claps*

hmmm
You did a pretty good job but you kinda lost me in the middle of the poem at 'lion cubs'
:\

It is a good poem but I would work on it more

mucho luv
Shadowfox

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Proxicon In reply to xShadowfoxX [2006-03-20 22:25:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^.^

(I had to do that...that was part of the assignment...)

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GothZombie [2006-03-20 05:08:01 +0000 UTC]

mmm...pretty...*falls down waterfall*

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Proxicon In reply to GothZombie [2006-03-20 22:24:43 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Thanks!
NOOOOOOOO!

*saves life*

I didn't mention that there were sharks.

Evil Sharks.

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GothZombie In reply to Proxicon [2006-03-21 00:56:37 +0000 UTC]

oh...heh...

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Proxicon In reply to GothZombie [2006-03-21 22:26:32 +0000 UTC]

Did they get you?!

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GothZombie In reply to Proxicon [2006-03-22 04:47:57 +0000 UTC]

nah, don't think so

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Proxicon In reply to GothZombie [2006-03-22 21:52:10 +0000 UTC]

Good!

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CaptainKickass [2006-03-20 03:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Tis a Goodun.... great imagery in this..... and no angst at all lol.... great work

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Proxicon In reply to CaptainKickass [2006-03-20 04:33:30 +0000 UTC]

Many Thanks.

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