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Published: 2006-04-10 08:24:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 98; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Shadows in the corner
A body on the floor
Everyone is stareing
Life is here no-more
A knife in front of me
Her blood at my side
I hear his voice calling
"If only he hadn't lied"
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Comments: 4

LittlePoot1 [2006-05-14 18:51:16 +0000 UTC]

Damn. I like the use of your words... The poem is very short, but it makes up for it by the descriptions and feelings. Two thumbs up and a big toe!
~Poot

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PanDemoniumAeon [2006-04-14 17:20:42 +0000 UTC]

Huh! So simple but at the same time has meaning and feelings!! good !

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Chandre [2006-04-10 18:58:00 +0000 UTC]

Awsome!Powerfull!Dark!I love it short and shweeeeeet!

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loonyvillage [2006-04-10 18:24:39 +0000 UTC]

i luv it short simple powerfull

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