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pseudokojo — Ordinary Words
Published: 2003-11-15 06:19:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 62; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Too damn succint, or just too short?I'll figure it out or wait it through.
I've been here before
But still am left without a clue.
It must be for you because there's
Nothing I can do for myself now
I've tried to let it go
But it gets harder every time.
And I believed,
But even that was not enough to stop the burn
And all I know is that
I miss you more each day.
What have I done, and why is it
I always try to fix these things
When all I have
Are these ordinary words?
It must be for you because there's
Nothing I can do for myself now.
But all I have
Are these ordinary words.
Comments: 2
Sometime ordinary words can mean so much,
But i get the feeling your trying to say just how empty some words can seem, and don't i know it.
But all in all good writing
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I kind of like the way the poem goes both directions. Because it depends on the perception, I'll bet that in the narrator' case, one side think one, and the other thinks the second (in regards to your comment). And thank you very much for your comment. And I love your name (as ironic as that sounds).
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