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Published: 2004-07-11 02:39:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 56; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Description Make me a path through this exhale.
Build an exit before the outwash
For I am brimmed with molten rock
And the burning has begun to seep from my eyes.

Soon the fires with find their way
To my mouth, and my hands will curl tight.

     -And everything around me is flammable.
     -And everyone I know burns quickly.

So give me release in this moment
Before the magma starts to flow.

Oh god, just let me walk away.
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dragoncharmer02 [2004-07-11 12:48:08 +0000 UTC]

I like this very much. It has very interesting imagery. I have never thought about tears that way...well...that is if that is what you are alluding to.

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pseudokojo In reply to dragoncharmer02 [2004-07-14 03:36:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh, good! It went up. da-da burped when I submitted it. In response: I like your reading of it very much It does include what I was meaning when I wrote those lines. I feel quite odd right now so this response will likely show that. Hope your day is quirky in the happy sense. G'bai now!

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dragoncharmer02 In reply to pseudokojo [2004-07-14 17:57:42 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm glad that your submission was a success. Things are odd for me right now. My boyfriend and I broke up again (last night actually) and I am trying to work through a lot of emotions at present. Keeping myself busy at work helps a little, but as you know from my poetry and such, he means a lot to me. There are certain things that I do not like about myself (too aggressive and too sensitive to criticism) that I am trying to change for my own benefit and maybe for the benefit of a future relationship with him. I know it probably sounds pathetic to be dreaming of being with someone that has broken up with me just last night, but I was planning on marrying him. Oh well, I guess. What else is one to say? Just that if it is meant to be, love will find a way. Ok...I'm done now.

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