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Published: 2012-07-12 12:23:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 1085; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 7
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Description Guess who's been playing fallout 3. Not me so IDK.

Something coloured with a background even.

Critiques and comments are highly appreciated!

Edit 1: Cleaned some lines, clouds fixed
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Comments: 3

Ag-Cat [2012-07-13 02:45:46 +0000 UTC]

I like the position, very nice and arty. The character expression is lovely too. ^^ I like her clothes movement too, I can really feel a breeze in the scene. What I might don't like is the clouds, they don't really look like clouds, but I barely notice them in the first look and only notice them when I look closer to the picture. And I'm not sure what is the blue thing behind the character. Great job overall. ^^

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PseudoSharp In reply to Ag-Cat [2012-07-13 08:38:09 +0000 UTC]

The blue thing is supposed to be a river and I agree the clouds could use some work. Would it be considered wrong if I edited it some more and change the submission file? I'd update the description listing the changes as well.

Anyway thank you for commenting, your help is appreciated.

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Ag-Cat In reply to PseudoSharp [2012-07-13 11:02:32 +0000 UTC]

I think it's fine to edit it and change the file, I do that all the time. ^^

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