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aeon-of-sorrow [2006-11-23 06:24:01 +0000 UTC]
ah! tyhe thought which goes into this. reading that, you can't help but feel that this ios a concept you've been building on for eons. not only is it an interesting mythos, but the diolouge between the two chatraters has real... well, charate to it. the pair come off as wonderfully cynical, while Franque hs a destinctive pessimistic air while also being a total snark. it's totally awsome to come across someone wgho's just as talented with a pen (or word processor) as they are with a pencil... or what ever the art material be.
in this case, it would look azsthough it's pen in this case aswell. even though it's a subtle touch, the texture of the cardboard makes fro a real sewll look. i dig the way it's showing through bsomwe of the heacvy areas of black, such as ohm's arm anmd leg. the foreshortening on that arm looks a little on the odd side but itt's no biggie (i think there may be something off with his proportions, but as we';rre only esposed to a triny fraction of him, it's kinda hard to tell). the poses really captures that feel of them chewing the fat in those last few moments before before they take action. there's a certain tensnse in the wy inwhich Franque's is gripping his staff, while ohm's pose had an e,lem,et of being a tad mroe relaxed about the situation at the hand, what with the fact that he's not looking at their objective,byut rather at the doctor.
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Obsolution [2006-11-03 00:23:24 +0000 UTC]
this is really cool, I love the dialogue you added here too.
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carrotgurl [2006-10-28 10:55:24 +0000 UTC]
gah! i've always liked the idea of your dream agents, and now i understand it just that bit better lol. very awesome, but it would be really cool if you could make it into writing writing...though your pictures are extremly cool also, so you could use them to lre people in o.o
serious though, i'd love to read things you write, and about the sandman man too, the one you drew with the dragon the other day, because he looks cool too o.o <.<
please?....i'll send you a cookie o.o
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Hettar7 [2006-10-22 03:12:17 +0000 UTC]
I like how Ohm's outfit is the darkest thing in the image. He is a dark and gloomy agent after all. Plus the outfit with those white buttons down the front seems pretty cool. i like the casual pose he's in. very appropriate for a conversation.
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Silveraxe [2006-10-20 02:21:36 +0000 UTC]
2 of my fav chars!! They're so awesome! ^w^
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solipherus [2006-10-13 04:40:48 +0000 UTC]
I love these characters, and the story you've created for them. I look forward to every new insight you give into this world of yours. XD Uber cool.
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TTSnim [2006-10-13 01:12:15 +0000 UTC]
I really like how you do hands, they are all ways so well executed. *Nods* Your lines are good too. I wish I had your inking skills!
Yay for Ohm and Franque and drawing at the job!
(We all know it takes absolutely NO brain cells to draw Squid. He just sort of happens!)
*Rolls around all over*
I can't wait till there is More! XD
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mainasha [2006-10-12 23:18:05 +0000 UTC]
nice
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Ashwings [2006-10-12 21:54:11 +0000 UTC]
I have been having some baaaad nightmares lately D: should call these guys heheh.
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lunarwolf0907 [2006-10-12 20:56:39 +0000 UTC]
There's nothing I can say that hasnt already been said. Owell. Its awsome. I like how all you use was pen, because getting to that level can be hard. Though obviously you've been there awhile XD
I'm faving this. Something about it just screams at me to do so. Maybe its Franque?
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devil-in-grey [2006-10-12 17:37:08 +0000 UTC]
xD i'd love to see Franque rule the world. Things would be deffinately interesting >__>
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PsychedelicMind In reply to Grim-Amentia [2006-10-13 08:32:58 +0000 UTC]
heee.... thankies for the encouraging words nya! And no need to be sorry at all! Questions are Super Good! Questions... will be figured out asap! Including that other one u asked (long long time ago) about hw the Studios work XD
um.. as of yesterday, Franque started being a Doctor XD okay... in his story i think he was originally training to be a Doctor... then something happened... and he didn't become one... but a long time later, because of certain (unknown even to me) circumstances, he's back in the 'game' and being all fussy about it. Erm. Something like that...
i'll work out the details as soon as i can get away from my dayjob!!! XD it's hard to think coherently of storyline when you're concentrating on menial tasks n flash animation. haha.... XD +wags tail at u+
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merrypaws [2006-10-12 16:44:40 +0000 UTC]
Heart. Picture, story AND info. IMy desires are fulfilled.
Hmmmm... One thing I don't recall you posting much are the harmless/beneficial dream creatures. Maybe in the future..? *nudge nudge*
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KinokoFry [2006-10-12 14:15:15 +0000 UTC]
Lovely lovely ink work there ^_^
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havockid [2006-10-12 13:41:49 +0000 UTC]
love the story!!!! u need to do more of this...
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Landel [2006-10-12 13:01:33 +0000 UTC]
Great concepts, great art!
So... are we looking at an illustrated book in the making, or what? Whoo!!!
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VanessaFardoe [2006-10-12 12:33:39 +0000 UTC]
The story sounsd really neat. Great inking too!
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DreamingExperience [2006-10-12 12:26:12 +0000 UTC]
Very nice backstory on it all, Panda.
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mintus-puffy [2006-10-12 12:19:04 +0000 UTC]
so spiffy cool!
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luthien-chan [2006-10-12 12:12:10 +0000 UTC]
Haha XD...
I'm amazezzzzed~ D:
How do you come up with such awesome things like thisss??? D:
Oh and did you just think of that dialogue on the spot or...what? :0
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UnknownProject [2006-10-12 11:10:22 +0000 UTC]
Like the presentation of the picture, like the presentation of the backstory. Fav'd.
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RedBishopInLove [2006-10-12 10:49:28 +0000 UTC]
Cooooooool! I love the back story, very creative.
The brown paper almost makes it look like a tarot card or something.
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kourui [2006-10-12 10:45:17 +0000 UTC]
beautiful style!!
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