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psychofr3akartjoker — Broken Love
Published: 2012-03-21 21:58:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 161; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 3
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Description It builds up inside like the rising tide
Never to         
Subside

Love

Fight for ever against the fever
It will never
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Love

Torn in two for loving you
Always true
It will never
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Love

Raging agony weeping tragedy
You are mad at me
It will never
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Love

In a broken place I see your face
There must be grace
It will never
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Love

You get me over, I think I owe her
My four leaf clover
It will never
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Love
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Comments: 7

gooeyshmooey [2012-04-01 05:47:52 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful. The begining "builds up like a rising tide" and fighting for ever againt the fever" , It's true, you cant help it, either you want it to or not, 'love' grows and you may try to hold back for whatever reason.. And in the end, well... you say it very well.. "in a broken place, I see your face"..Anyway... I like it.

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psychofr3akartjoker In reply to gooeyshmooey [2012-04-01 23:05:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much i really appreciate it

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brinababy10 [2012-03-28 00:41:49 +0000 UTC]

absolute masterpiece!

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psychofr3akartjoker In reply to brinababy10 [2012-03-28 04:03:52 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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13-Black-Hearted [2012-03-23 18:35:32 +0000 UTC]

that is something that almost all of us at some point have to face..the rest depends on how each one choose to see it... and the way i see it those lines resemble things in my mind XD

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Rosiepeacock [2012-03-22 22:43:44 +0000 UTC]

I love the way this poems structure resembles a heart rate monitor in its layout, with the peaks explaining and the lows being 'love'. It's beautiful.

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psychofr3akartjoker In reply to Rosiepeacock [2012-03-22 22:58:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much this really means a lot to me

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