GJ301 [2016-10-25 00:00:10 +0000 UTC]
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I almost like to imagine that the premise of this image is that Sweetie Belle was surprised to catch an apple with her horn, and now she’s acting all smug about her accomplishment, especially after the last time she tried to do it. The caption “So fab” is the compliment she is giving herself in her head. It sort of cracks me up. The technique is also nicely done. I admire the consistent line work, flawlessly capturing Sweetie Belle appearance. I also like how even thought the background is a plain grey, there’s still some action going on, like the shadow under Sweetie Belle. As for criticisms, I would try to make it look as if SB’s front is connected to the rest of her body. That line separating her chest and her ribs makes it look like they’re not united. Another advisement I would make is to raise her left eye so that the pair looks more aligned. Other than that, I think this illustration is decent. It’s well crafted, and it displays a side to Sweetie Belle that we’ve rarely seen. Keep up the great work, PucksterV!
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PucksterV In reply to GJ301 [2016-10-25 11:51:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you GJ I'm glad you like it. Even though it's and old piece and I have improved a lot since, I always appreciate your critique <3 Helps me get even better!
GJ301 In reply to PucksterV [2016-10-25 17:54:02 +0000 UTC]
Well I'm glad you're taking my advice even though this piece is pretty old. And you're welcome! It's always pleases me to offer insight!
PucksterV In reply to GJ301 [2016-10-25 19:46:58 +0000 UTC]
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rautamiekka [2018-10-14 12:46:13 +0000 UTC]
Best of all: she can no longer stab anyone
vitalsparkle [2016-04-12 13:20:15 +0000 UTC]
This is pretty awesome.
PucksterV In reply to vitalsparkle [2016-04-12 13:33:58 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^^
ChatonIsHere [2016-04-09 23:01:16 +0000 UTC]
Damn son.
PucksterV In reply to ChatonIsHere [2016-04-09 23:06:44 +0000 UTC]
damn <3
ChatonIsHere In reply to PucksterV [2016-04-10 10:26:01 +0000 UTC]
TOO HOTHOT DAMNFOR THE POLICE, AND THE FIREMANTOO HOT(idfk help me ;-
PucksterV In reply to ChatonIsHere [2016-04-10 11:08:36 +0000 UTC]
so hawt <3
TrustALight [2016-04-09 22:57:34 +0000 UTC]
IT'S STILL ADORABLE, I SAY IT
PucksterV In reply to TrustALight [2016-04-09 23:04:26 +0000 UTC]
yus <3