Comments: 16
dragonestea [2012-01-20 23:36:03 +0000 UTC]
most of the bg looks fine, just give the wall a little moar visual intrigue.
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Awesome-Kitsune [2012-01-11 03:23:59 +0000 UTC]
Background could use some work, but the rest is pretty good. I also like the outfit design. Good job!
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Puffyko In reply to Awesome-Kitsune [2012-01-14 22:33:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the comment! :3 I did say I will re do the bg... but I kinda forgot! xD But I am not really sure what I culd do... accept make the lines less visable and make the tiles more realistic. x______x
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Puffyko In reply to dinaminzer [2012-01-20 23:22:29 +0000 UTC]
Well I do like to ummm... make my stories tragic. ^^" But I hope you will still like it! :3
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MyC-chan [2012-01-07 17:35:34 +0000 UTC]
She is really cute, i love the eyes and hair, the shading is really nice too
The background is interesting it kinda reminds me on saikano because of all the trash.
I think her legs are a bit weird, the knee part and the pocket on her shirt looks like a big bubble also the background lacks on shadows maybe cuz you wanted it to be more blurry so she stands out?
anyway i really love the hands and face its so adorable, like i already said the shadows are great mainly on the shirt and i really like her normalish outfit =3
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Puffyko In reply to MyC-chan [2012-01-07 17:53:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for commenting. I am planing on changing the background, so thank you for the ideas! ^^
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JesterDae [2011-12-30 12:16:32 +0000 UTC]
I think the problem might be her legs. They're way to tiny and thin for the size of her body. Also the object she is sitting on kinda looks like it's floating freely in space, since the weight of it would surely crush her ankles, especially if she's sitting on it.
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Puffyko In reply to JesterDae [2012-01-03 20:24:25 +0000 UTC]
True true... But I do like the tiny legs style. But I guess the gun really is a bit of... o_______O
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Naiichie [2011-12-29 09:33:24 +0000 UTC]
ohhh why don't you like it? : O
well if you need help.. idk i would add some pink reflection on stuff behind her.. like.. some pink light would be there do you get me LOL.
but you don't have to do that it's just a silly idea <_<
but her face is so adorable asdfghjkjhg ;w;
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Puffyko In reply to Naiichie [2012-01-03 20:22:49 +0000 UTC]
Wait wha!!! xD Why behind her? o: Thank you for commenting. :3
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Naiichie In reply to Puffyko [2012-01-04 05:05:00 +0000 UTC]
uhh xD
i can't explain stuff xD
well not behind her just.. in.. bg xD well idk ignore me just XD
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