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rox4eva [2010-01-08 14:58:59 +0000 UTC]
that is brilliant! I love it!
you portrayed Kixytt EXTRAORDINARILY well- better than I probably would have >u>
only a few quirks- she's too naive to know as simple innuendos as "sharing a bed". very simple minded and scatterbrained, but other than that, AWESOME.
oh, but I did notice a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes, especially in the bit where you introduced Kixytt.
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rox4eva In reply to PumpkinApprentice431 [2010-01-09 05:59:50 +0000 UTC]
yeah, what I meant was like, typical response to that would rather be "Why would I want to share a bed with you? I got my own one..."
but oh well, it's probably just how I read it that it seemed different in my head >.>
if you know what I mean.
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