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punkikoala — The Hall
Published: 2004-06-11 03:11:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 186; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Im trapped in this lonely hall.The one in which we all fell apart.
It's tainted with the pictures of the past,
And I see through the window where
you kept your thoughts.
Nobody cares at all.
So we all burried ourselves in
the fights from long ago.
And those painfull memories flood back in a mirage.
The tender first kisses, and the bitter last.
The stolen glances of the ones we cant have.
Our laughter and sobs echo through.
The hall.
The hall in which we all fell apart.
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Comments: 3
I KNOW THIS HALL! THIS WAS THE VERY HALL THAT I MADE A JACKASS OUT OF MYSELF EVERY SINGLE DAY WHEN I WAS IN HIGHSCHOOL! I BET THAT HALL STILL SMELLS LIKE PEWP! By the way, awesome writing, you rock, ROCK AND ROLL!
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its cool. it could be about more than just school and friends if you look at it in a different way. kinda could be about relationships and the such if you see what i mean...
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Powerful ending. You should still continue on the theme of the hall and such...it sounds like it could produce many more great poems..it's a very broad topic...leaving it open to a lot. I like this
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