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Published: 2008-08-12 03:10:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 43; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description Innocent
Depressed, embarrassed, lonely
Jealous, exhausted, angry
Ashamed, over whelmed, hopeful
Disgusted, hurt, love struck
Suspicious, guilty, confident
Happy, enraged, frustrated
Mischievous, frightened, confused
Scared, vengeful, pressured
Sad, concerned, timid, worried
Anxious.
Emotions of an innocent girl.
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bittersweetlastlaugh [2008-08-12 03:13:56 +0000 UTC]

looks you took thesarus of emotion and chucked it at the screen. Im all about scatterbrained emotion put to the written word....but i think if you lengthen out each emotion to convey the level and severity it would make for a more involving work

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punkster135 In reply to bittersweetlastlaugh [2008-08-12 03:20:06 +0000 UTC]

oh ok. thanks for the advice! this poem was written a long time ago though so yea lol. but thanks anyways! i'll make sure to keep that in mind.

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