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Published: 2007-11-28 01:35:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 85; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Trapped:

Running through the field,
free to roam.
Hearts gone wild,
no boundaries nor ties.
She prances through,
going to the abyss.
Then stops,
Sees,
Cries.
The roar of her voice,
rumbling through that jagged fence.
No freedom.
No choice.
No chance to be.
The world gone wicked,
to stay in that cage.
A bird sings out,
Too far away.  
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Comments: 6

okasha [2007-11-29 03:14:26 +0000 UTC]

I like it! (I have new respect for poems after trying to write one and failing it off to my scraps )

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puppyobsession123 In reply to okasha [2007-11-30 02:22:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

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malicedomestic [2007-11-28 23:38:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh lovely. Reminds me of Persephone's Abduction.

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puppyobsession123 In reply to malicedomestic [2007-11-30 02:26:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^ I can see where it reminds you of it!

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malicedomestic In reply to puppyobsession123 [2007-11-30 19:11:14 +0000 UTC]

Your signature also reminds me of a Morrissey lyric, so you seem to be covering all fields

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puppyobsession123 In reply to malicedomestic [2007-12-02 00:37:25 +0000 UTC]

lol

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