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puppypaws13 — Breathe Silence
Published: 2012-05-14 02:15:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 77; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description Hold my breath and wait
For something, anything at all
That will make this okay

My heart is lost in the shuffle
Mind is screaming one thing
Soul battling for it all to stop

I want time to freeze
Just for a few days
Want to sit and breathe silence

Need a reminder of what it's like
To feel without hurting
Sit in silence, not be scared of the darkness

Cause I know it holds the demons
Waiting to pounce the very second
I let this wall I've built fall.
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Comments: 3

Mr-Timeshadow [2012-05-14 02:27:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very intense and beautifully written. I can't see so much as a single nitpick or minor suggestion. Well done!

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puppypaws13 In reply to Mr-Timeshadow [2012-05-14 15:04:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow thanks so much Btw welcome to dA!

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Mr-Timeshadow In reply to puppypaws13 [2012-05-15 01:24:45 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, and thanks for the warm words of greeting!

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