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Togechu [2013-05-05 01:13:40 +0000 UTC]

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Okay so what really caught my eye at first was the bright sun (i cannot draw suns and what i do is i go though deviantart checking out other peoples art and if i like it i save it in a folder in my computer so maybe itll help me learn something new) and the sun is PERFECT the wonderful colors surrounding it (bright cyan blue merging into the darker blue its WONDERFUL i absolutely LOVE it)
Next, after clicking on the pic to see a more close-up view i noticed the blur around the braviary's wings and tail which is also perfect, it really shows the movement in the braviary, so that was very well done too
Also like how the camera is focused on the face by how the face is not blurry e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/>
The psotioning of the braviary is great, too :3

Okay, now on to the not-so-perfect things...
The background is a bit too blank :/ i understand that the sun is supposed to take up much of the drawing, but your focus is the braviary not the sun, so i guess it should be bigger and/or have something else in there, like an additonal color or effect that would make the pic concentrate more on the bird than the sun behind it, because like i said, its the background thats extremely eye-catching, not the actual bird

Anyway, seems like youve mastered the use of perspectives and light effects :3
Great job, overall X3

Hope this helps ^_^'

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darkness423 [2013-05-13 16:10:12 +0000 UTC]

Feels like im lookin at the sky. gj

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