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purplem19 — Ongoing struggle
Published: 2006-01-07 16:45:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 33; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description Time stops and the air grows thin
breathing heavily she strikes
pushing every frustration into a single blow
The hit means nothing it's the words that sting the most
ringing like an alarm in her head setting her off and driving her crazy
The oponent falls,silence falls
and everything melts away
The personlying there was a stranger, unknown to her
The words still ringing clearly "I don't care anymore!"
Whos words? hers? kes her words but to who?
who was that stranger? turning her over
she was no stranger, she was a product of her very own hate,
her daughter
The hit was brushed off the girls shoulder, but it was the words that knocked her out.
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Comments: 6

Chrissy-wolf [2006-01-19 02:02:07 +0000 UTC]

omg!!! I love the ending!!!!!

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purplem19 In reply to Chrissy-wolf [2006-01-19 20:11:42 +0000 UTC]

why thank you although i cant remember it....hmmmm?

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dontkillthellama [2006-01-08 11:51:19 +0000 UTC]

loe the last line... so powerful... woah!

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purplem19 In reply to dontkillthellama [2006-01-09 22:31:08 +0000 UTC]

spanx

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poeticdiscord [2006-01-07 17:14:11 +0000 UTC]

wow. . .
i'm not exactly sure what it's referring to since i don't know you personally,
but i like the poem itself

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purplem19 In reply to poeticdiscord [2006-01-07 17:19:37 +0000 UTC]

why thank you, glad you liked it

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