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Published: 2009-01-26 03:33:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 166; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 7
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Description Hundreds of miles away,
Is where I head today.
Far away from the issues,
That made me act this way.
I cared for lots of people,
But they never cared for me.
I was lost and alone,
And needed some help.
I gave everyone my time,
But was not granted the same.
I really needed someone to talk to,
Someone to see the pain,
But no one ever helped me,
So I jumped out of this plane.
I saw all the clouds,
And hoped they would catch me,
But much like my friends,
They only deceived me.
I went strait through the clouds,
And plummeted to the ground.
I finally hit my breaking point,
Not as if you cared.
I’m heading off to start again,
Far away from home.
To find people who care for me,
Like I know some people do.
Maybe you’ll come find me,
And then if you do,
I’ll know you cared for me,
Much like I did for you.
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Comments: 8

Vaenom89 [2009-01-28 16:02:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow, i thought it was awesome, i can relate to a lot about what was said in your poem high school wasn't a breeze for me either but those days are behind me now so all good

i loved it, gave me a flutter somewhere round' here *points to chest* haha <3

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purpleturtle909 In reply to Vaenom89 [2009-01-29 23:55:13 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I'm glad you got something out of it. That means a lot.

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Jaded-Phoenix [2009-01-26 03:44:22 +0000 UTC]

very nice. and strongly written ^_^

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purpleturtle909 In reply to Jaded-Phoenix [2009-01-26 04:04:38 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you.

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Jaded-Phoenix In reply to purpleturtle909 [2009-01-26 04:25:34 +0000 UTC]

^__^

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FANGED-DISTURBER [2009-01-26 03:38:49 +0000 UTC]

its nice. i like it

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purpleturtle909 In reply to FANGED-DISTURBER [2009-01-26 04:04:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanx

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FANGED-DISTURBER In reply to purpleturtle909 [2009-01-27 05:06:49 +0000 UTC]

YUP

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