bramblepaws [2017-05-12 20:15:34 +0000 UTC]
thoughts on this page
third panel should be a wide one, kasey standing at one end and making it really obvious that everyone turns to look at her. outsider in the wrong place!!!
6th panel seems unnecessary
needs to be more obvious that koro is staring at her in amusement
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