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Published: 2020-03-17 21:26:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 3046; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 1
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Description Here is my oc Perilla who I decided to pair with Raditz. I was inspired by MasakoX's what if series which is pretty cool but I have some big issues with the way he went about redeeming Raditz. To make a long story short, if Raditz managed to survive Piccolo's attack but Goku was killed then why wouldn't Raditz simply kill Piccolo as well? Then the earth would be his to take over before Vegeta and Nappa got there. In Dragonball redemption typically doesn't happen unless Goku is able to beat the crap out of his opponent, they live through it, and later on they realize that their motivations align. Ironically Raditz was too strong for that to work, which is likely why he stayed dead. The story simply advanced to a point where he wasn't needed anymore.

So in my idea for a Raditz redemption he dies and finds a way to escape hell. Of course canonically there is no way to escape hell but what I'm writing is very fanfiction-esque and ultimately Raditz becomes a Galactic Patrol Elite.

Perilla (aka Peril) is my OC. She is in the same boat albiet for different reasons. She was a fighter/medic for the resistance against Freiza, her last station set on a planet resisting Freiza's control, only for her and her comrades to find out that it was a trap as the people they were sent in to help, contacted Freiza's army to slaughter them. Enraged by the betrayal, Peril killed noncombatants indiscriminately as she and a few others sacrificed themselves to hold off Freiza's army so the rest of her military unit could escape. Ultimately she runs up against and is killed by Raditz.

Time in hell doesn't necessarily run congruent with time in the living world but eventually Raditz is also shunted to hell after getting killed by Goku and Piccolo's team attack. The two see each other again and its not a happy meet up. The anger subsides since neither of them can die again and through a set of circumstances and events they begin to tolerate each other's company. It culminates in them meeting a demon named Zabaone who has the power to give them back their bodies and return them to the land of the living if they strike a deal with him. The deal is struck and the real adventure begins.

I'm using Dragon Ball Z's canon before Toriyama rewrote a lot of stuff in Super.

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SuperMarioFemaleFan [2021-01-07 20:31:11 +0000 UTC]

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PutterPen In reply to SuperMarioFemaleFan [2021-01-10 09:12:03 +0000 UTC]

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SuperMarioFemaleFan In reply to PutterPen [2021-04-08 10:29:03 +0000 UTC]

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Satanbrony [2020-04-12 04:51:17 +0000 UTC]

The moment I saw this I thought about Masuko's series

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MightyMorphinPower4 [2020-04-09 10:00:01 +0000 UTC]

Exllcent work

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