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Published: 2012-01-08 03:55:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 3274; Favourites: 97; Downloads: 481
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Description Just practicing with my tablet ^^

based on this--->[link]

hope you like C:
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Comments: 31

SiIent [2012-01-10 17:05:55 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Well, let's start off by saying that the colors are really nice. Though bright, they somehow manage to work well together. There is a few problems I have to address though, like that hand. That is where my eyes first went, and the anatomy is very awkward, I'm not sure if fingers bend in that way! Also, the glasses wouldn't be that even if she was holding them in that manner. Maybe try looking at real life pictures for angle reference. The lines in the hair are a little off-putting. And to make it more natural, maybe put a few pieces of stray hair around her horns? Which brings me to this: They look like paper sitting on top of her head. Trust me, even the most simple shading can go a long way! Anyways, I love her facial expression, it's very well in character. I also love how you outlined it in darker colors, it enhances the impact the bright colors are making. I think this would look great with more detail, like a background or a second character! All together, it was a nice concept and I think you're doing very well for being new to tablets! I hope this can help you out a little bit.

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Pyrope-Pirate In reply to SiIent [2012-01-10 19:23:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I will try to incorporate your advice into my new drawings ^^
This is actually my very first drawing with my tablet and I'm glad you commented C:

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SiIent In reply to Pyrope-Pirate [2012-01-10 20:05:42 +0000 UTC]

I really liked it honestly
! I didn't want to sound mean or anything but there's always room for improvement and you're crazy good for a beginner! ^-^

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Pyrope-Pirate In reply to SiIent [2012-01-10 20:45:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! <3
Oh no you weren't mean at all; I understand that it was constructive criticism and I really appreciate it ;D
Besides it will help improve my art and that's my goal, to become better at drawing digitally and traditionally ^^

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SiIent In reply to Pyrope-Pirate [2012-01-10 20:56:04 +0000 UTC]

Okay! >u< I just don't want so come off sounding like a dick xD I'm glad you found it helpful, you have great potential! I'm gonna watch your page so I can see your progress c:

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Pyrope-Pirate In reply to SiIent [2012-01-10 21:03:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
ahh noo my older drawings suck soo much xD
...but if you really want to thats fine ^^

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SiIent In reply to Pyrope-Pirate [2012-01-10 21:25:35 +0000 UTC]

Pftt guuurl my old art is terrible, we all have bad art pasts xD

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Pyrope-Pirate In reply to SiIent [2012-01-10 21:30:55 +0000 UTC]

I guess so, and it's sorta fun to see how much we improved too! ^^

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SiIent In reply to Pyrope-Pirate [2012-01-10 21:31:48 +0000 UTC]

Of course! You can only get better C:

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Pyrope-Pirate In reply to SiIent [2012-01-10 21:38:09 +0000 UTC]

Yes, "practice makes perfect" is one of the most true sayings ;D

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SiIent In reply to Pyrope-Pirate [2012-01-10 21:42:23 +0000 UTC]

Of course! ^-^

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Pyrope-Pirate In reply to SiIent [2012-01-11 03:42:30 +0000 UTC]

I look forward to getting more criticism from you C:

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SiIent In reply to Pyrope-Pirate [2012-01-12 01:19:53 +0000 UTC]

Feel free to do the same for me as well! ^o^

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Pyrope-Pirate In reply to SiIent [2012-01-12 02:07:26 +0000 UTC]

hehe okay! C:

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SiIent In reply to Pyrope-Pirate [2012-01-12 03:12:44 +0000 UTC]

n_n

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Ty-Newcomb [2012-01-10 20:54:07 +0000 UTC]

woah you drew this pose soo good! plus the hands are awesome!!

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Pyrope-Pirate In reply to Ty-Newcomb [2012-01-10 21:04:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

ahhh I don't want to go back to school...

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Ty-Newcomb In reply to Pyrope-Pirate [2012-01-10 21:22:18 +0000 UTC]

me either!! wahhhh wwaaaaahh !!!

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Pyrope-Pirate In reply to Ty-Newcomb [2012-01-10 21:32:02 +0000 UTC]

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Kyriemachi In reply to Pyrope-Pirate [2012-01-15 17:19:35 +0000 UTC]

Stop makin fun of me lulz I am like that but quit it

not funny

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Pyrope-Pirate In reply to Kyriemachi [2012-01-16 05:18:02 +0000 UTC]

hahha okays~~ ;D

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Espada-12 [2012-01-09 03:56:07 +0000 UTC]

woah! Just practicing you say?xD this is pretty neat!

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Pyrope-Pirate In reply to Espada-12 [2012-01-09 04:11:42 +0000 UTC]

haha yeah but it took a long time .-.
Thank you!!

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Espada-12 In reply to Pyrope-Pirate [2012-01-09 04:18:47 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome~!

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Pyrope-Pirate In reply to Espada-12 [2012-01-09 04:21:21 +0000 UTC]


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AnimeEarthGirl [2012-01-08 22:28:36 +0000 UTC]

oh gog this is awesome X3

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Pyrope-Pirate In reply to AnimeEarthGirl [2012-01-09 03:11:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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RedMoonRogue [2012-01-08 19:43:02 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS CALLED THE BEST THING.

EVER.

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Pyrope-Pirate In reply to RedMoonRogue [2012-01-08 20:49:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <3

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Felictric [2012-01-08 15:38:09 +0000 UTC]

1S TH1S M3

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RedMoonRogue In reply to Felictric [2012-01-08 19:42:24 +0000 UTC]

MAYBE.

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