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deadrose4u2000 [2009-03-03 07:04:09 +0000 UTC]

As said before more motion in the hair and tail make it flow with the picture.
The foot is a little wonky pushed up a bit much.
Other than that great coloring and good anatomy.:}
keep it up!

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Alamus [2009-03-03 03:02:53 +0000 UTC]

The pose is nice, and your anatomy is pretty spot on. But one thing that gets me is her hair and tail... Where is the motion? In her body language it looks like she is jumping down and landing or possibly skipping foward, but her hair and tail have no motion to them. It makes the top half of her not match the bottom half and if you actually cut the image in two you would get the sense they wouldn't belong.

I think if you just gave even a little movement to her hair and tail you would have a overall better picture. Hope this helps.

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softmode [2009-03-02 00:07:21 +0000 UTC]

I like this style. It is nice, doesn't take months, and doesn't feel too flat despite using mainly flat colors. Good job. > Also, nekomimi mode.

But I think it can be improved, maybe by trying the following things:

1.) The ears don't look the same size, even with angle and perspective taken into consideration. Try increasing the width of the shriveled up ear more.

2.) her foot looks detached from her leg; use your own foot for reference next time. If you can't imitate it (Or, you're not that flexible, it is impossible for the human body to imitate without breaking something or going through some modifications,) then don't draw it that way. Or if it really hurts.

3.) IMO, the tail doesn't look like it attaches to her pelvis, due to how low the higher point of the tail is at.

) cat-tail ftw.

4.) nearer to the bottom of the picture, the red lineart is a little bit strong; it seems to "flicker" or looks like a raised edge compared to the colors. Choose a color that's less strong as that red, and I think it can look as good as it does near the top of the picture.

I am looking forward to your progress. >:3

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tojisuzuhara [2008-12-15 02:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Aww. Those colors are really cute. I don't know if I'm in love with the specific red outline, but the other colors are great!

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Albrieo [2008-12-13 20:58:14 +0000 UTC]

Very cool! I like the pose! :3

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anime-honeybee [2008-12-13 14:56:44 +0000 UTC]

so smooth and casual looking XD love the composition, the placement of the whip draws the eye around the image and the girl's pose is so lively XD aww their shadow forms a heart :B dawww

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kuddlekinss [2008-12-13 12:13:06 +0000 UTC]

*glomp hug squish* You didn't ruin her at alllllll~

Thank you so much!

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Elegant-Ruin [2008-12-13 09:57:48 +0000 UTC]

awww thats adorable! You have such a unique style, I love looking at it!

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marychain [2008-12-13 05:32:44 +0000 UTC]

love it!!
omg, your art get better and better every time you post

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eanbowman [2008-12-13 05:30:52 +0000 UTC]

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Launite [2008-12-13 05:12:03 +0000 UTC]

awesome-ness =u=

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