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quack2ice β€” locked inside
Published: 2005-10-20 06:37:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 46; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description don't let me shut myself inside,
it's cold and dark deep in my soul.
my retreat from the uncertain world,
like the comfort of a caress from
a cold, dead hand.

steal the key to this dank dungeon,
make me unafraid of me.
tell me i'm special
even if it is a lie.

hold my hand tight
don't let me slip into my casket
take the shovel from my grasp,
take the gag from my mouth,
restrain the soil from
suffocating my last plea for help.

please don't let me die in here - alone...




Β©adrianne leigh
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Comments: 4

hunter12 [2005-10-21 20:15:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh, sorry! I didn't mean rage inside. There is a poem or song that has the words .. rage, rage against the dying of the light. Its meaning, if i remember right, was not to give in but fight against losing the light of your life... rage, rage against the dying of the light.. Tim

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quack2ice In reply to hunter12 [2005-10-21 23:15:27 +0000 UTC]

ohhh... haha thank you for clarifying... it makes so much more sense now!! (=

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hunter12 [2005-10-20 06:43:59 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like the pit of depression.. Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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quack2ice In reply to hunter12 [2005-10-21 17:54:09 +0000 UTC]

you see rage? that's really interesting... i was feeling more desperation when i wrote this... like "someone please help me!!!"

thanks for your comment (=

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