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Description She had always wanted to make something of herself,
But always seemed to fail,
She concentrated too hard on being perfect at everything,
That nothing got accomplished.

Overwhelmed.

They had always put her down,
While others tried to raise her up.
They laughed in her face when she was confident,
"You can't do that," they said with a sneer.
She seethed - weeped in silence.

She had always wanted to make something of herself,
But always seemed to fail.
Now she lay inside her grave,
A hollow shell of nothing.





©adrianne.leigh.2003
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roadside [2005-12-27 19:18:57 +0000 UTC]

x____x can we say DEPRESSING. *glomps* you can be whatever you wanna be, don't let stupid people put you down. grr, stupid people!

i believe in you.

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quack2ice In reply to roadside [2005-12-27 22:54:04 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwww thank you!!! <333 i wrote that like almost 3 years ago... so my point of view has changed for the better, i think *loves on you* but THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!! i don't hear that often enough anymore!

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