Comments: 20
CommodoreZeke [2010-08-31 05:36:41 +0000 UTC]
Not bad. Your future bosses will approve.
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Axel230 [2010-03-26 01:32:42 +0000 UTC]
Nice! I really liked it, I got to hate Satou-Sensei >.<
It's strange, there are just a few K-on fanfiction on DA
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quamp In reply to Axel230 [2010-03-26 03:46:08 +0000 UTC]
Well, if you really want fanfic, you should try some of the bigger sites like fanfiction.net.
Of course, you're much more likely to run into K-ON! Gary Stus there.
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lavistrikesback [2010-03-22 14:09:41 +0000 UTC]
I dunno, but I was half-hoping for Yui to snap and go all RAEG and strangle Satou-sensei into submission.
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quamp In reply to lavistrikesback [2010-03-22 14:24:21 +0000 UTC]
Uh... don't you think that would be a bit out of character for her?
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lavistrikesback In reply to quamp [2010-03-22 14:30:20 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. But that's just me lol.
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AO968 [2010-03-20 13:23:03 +0000 UTC]
I liked it. Could easily see this happen in the show.
A few (minor) errors I noticed:
1. The part where they play Cagayake! Girls and what comes after it is mentioned twice. You probably copied and pasted that bit without noticing it,
2. Ui calls Yui 'Onii-chan'. However, 'Onii-chan' means big brother; what Ui should have said was 'Onee-chan(which means big sister),
3. Ritsu-chan is usually shortened to Ricchan.
Writing style itself was good, the story was easy to read and understand, so overall a very good attempt at a fanfic.
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AO968 In reply to AO968 [2010-03-20 13:24:33 +0000 UTC]
Messed up my tags. Damn you DA, for not having an 'edit' feature for comments.
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kenny4896 [2010-03-20 09:44:41 +0000 UTC]
how do you put the Creative Common license on your deviantations?
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quamp In reply to kenny4896 [2010-03-20 14:13:48 +0000 UTC]
Underneath where it asks you if the deviation contains mature content is a button for that (when you submit the work.)
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kenny4896 [2010-03-20 09:27:03 +0000 UTC]
Did you write this yourself?
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quamp In reply to kenny4896 [2010-03-20 14:13:56 +0000 UTC]
Yes.
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kenny4896 [2010-03-20 04:59:51 +0000 UTC]
Stupid woman with he future bosses~ hate people who keeps repeating things like that~ nice story btw~ ( i want to try and draw it into a comic~)
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quamp In reply to kenny4896 [2010-03-20 05:05:59 +0000 UTC]
Go right ahead.
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