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QueenofCards — Is love black and white?

Published: 2011-11-12 17:36:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 4933; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 14
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Description Tralalalallalala.... okay that was random. Anyways this is for the 100 theme challenge.
Opinions on the amtter are very much appreciated. Feedback on teh drawing and the poem are very much appreciated as well.
Yes , I made a poem^^

Is love black and white?

They say nothing is black and white
But this is either wrong or right
You either love me or you don’t
You’ll either stay or you won’t
They say nothing is white or black
But you’re on the right or the wrong track
You go to heaven or to hell
You’re ill or you’re well
You can feel it strong or not at all
You can either stand or you can fall
No inbetween for many a thing
You can either cry or sing
So when the tears drown the spark
It might not be black but it’s pretty dark
And when it feels you’re taking flight
It might not be white but it’s pretty light


!00 theme challenge
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Theme 2: love
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Comments: 7

merryvillemiss [2011-11-14 18:17:36 +0000 UTC]

I love the simplicity of this (both the pic and the poem) I's nice and straight forward

I *do* have something to add. The line "You’re ill or you’re well" doesn't seem to match the rhythm... you might want to change it to " you are", just a suggestion, though

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QueenofCards In reply to merryvillemiss [2011-11-14 18:46:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Yes that might be a good idea.

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Gyaruru [2011-11-13 13:05:02 +0000 UTC]

The poem is pretty nice I like how there's this heart in the middle of the drawing

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QueenofCards In reply to Gyaruru [2011-11-13 13:10:12 +0000 UTC]

that actually was the only thing I knew I wanted from the start of the drawing the rest is just incidental circumstance^^

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Gyaruru In reply to QueenofCards [2011-11-13 13:12:18 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha, well, I think it worked out well

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QueenofCards In reply to Gyaruru [2011-11-13 13:13:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you^^

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Gyaruru In reply to QueenofCards [2011-11-13 13:24:15 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome <3

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