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merryvillemiss [2011-11-14 18:17:36 +0000 UTC]
I love the simplicity of this (both the pic and the poem) I's nice and straight forward
I *do* have something to add. The line "You’re ill or you’re well" doesn't seem to match the rhythm... you might want to change it to " you are", just a suggestion, though
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QueenofCards In reply to Gyaruru [2011-11-13 13:10:12 +0000 UTC]
that actually was the only thing I knew I wanted from the start of the drawing the rest is just incidental circumstance^^
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