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QueenOfPrussia — .:The Fall:.
Published: 2010-07-22 21:45:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1877; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 3
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Description Red eyes scanned the many people that crowed the streets of East Berlin. White hair sticking up in all directions, the man made his way over to a curb and sat down. He closed his eyes in pain. Sitting, standing, walking; it all hurt.

Gilbert Weillschmidt, formerly known as the Kingdom of Prussia, had just literally got out of Hell. The Berlin Wall, separating East and West Berlin, was coming down. Many people had already jumped the wall, greeting family members, friends. The thought made Gilbert happy, as he could feel their happiness.

But at the same time, there was a bitterness.

He couldn't cross the wall until they tore it down.

He had to wait days to see his Brüder.

The albino German buried his face in his hands. Damn this all! was all Gilbert thought, jumping slightly when a warm hand pressed against his arm. He raised his head, staring into sea blue eyes. Concern was heavy in them, blond eyebrows knotted together. Pale blond hair was framing her face, draped over one shoulder.

"Are you alright?"

Gilbert pulled his arm away from her hand, eyes narrowing. The young women pull her hand back, rubbing her jean-covered arm.

"I'm sorry. I didn't mean to startle you. I'm Friederike Gutermuth. What's your name?" the women, Friederike, smiled at him, much too brightly. It reminded Gilbert of a certain Italian.

". . . Gilbert."

"It's nice to meet you, Gilbert!" her eyes stated glued to his. "Do you have family on the West side?" the question was so bold and forward, it took Gilbert by surprise. Friederike's smile faded a bit, as if just realizing how bold she was being with a stranger. "I'm sorry, I-"

"My younger Brüder. You?"

Her smile came back a bit, and shook her head. "No. Most of my family left to Austria two years ago. My Opa died one year ago." from the look on her face, Gilbert could tell the only thing that effected her was her Grossvater's death.

"You miss him?"

"Very. You're brother?"

"Yeah."

The two Germans sat in silence, the only noise was from the crowd around them. Gilbert, for one, was shocked. Not many people could look him in the eyes for as long as Friederike as. Her blue eyes refused to leave his red ones.

"Opa used to sit me in his lap," she began, once again surprising Gilbert. "and he would tell me stories of Prussia." the albino sat up a little straighter. People still talk about his once great nation? "He was born there, and he, along with others, were crushed when it was dissolved and no longer a country in 1947." this hit Gilbert hard.

He was longer a country. Why was he here?

"Though," Friederike continued. "to him, East Germany is Prussia. It's why when our family left, he stayed." her smile still kept strong. This, again, hit Gilbert hard. He was still here, right? So, he was attached to land somewhere.

East and West.

Just like Italy's North and South.

Against his better judgment, Gilbert had a small smile. That sounded right, it sounded perfect.

"Many people still have Prussian blood, so the Prussian spirit is still alive! As a matter of fact, I'm named after King Frederick 1 of Prussia!" Pride crept into Gilbert after hearing who she was named after, his favorite ruler. But, though her sentence was happy, her smile faded and she bit her lip. "Will Germans ever have their spirit back?"

Gilbert's eyes widen a bit. How was his Brüder doing? The last time he had seen him, he was a mess.

Broken.

Would Germany ever recover?

"I hope so." him specking must have surprised her. She blinked for a few seconds, but then smiled.

"Me too! Despite what happened," at this, Gilbert grimaced. "Germany is still a wonderful place! Great people have come from here, it has a beautiful country side and well, not a lot of people would say this out loud, but, I love Germany." that much was true, Gilbert had to admit. And it disgusted Gilbert that today's German had to feel guilt for what happened years ago, for something they had nothing to do with. Hell, most of them hadn't even been born yet!

But to hear this young German women speak like that made him feel up with hope. Her kids will love Germany.

"Someday," Friederike said, even as Gilbert was thinking it. "we will proudly raise the German flag and feel pride for our Germany. Someday, we will feel good about being German." she let her tears fall, her smile still on her lips. She reached over and laid her hand over Gilberts.

And Gilbert let her.

He put his over hand over hers and squeezed, his own smile on his lips.

"Thank you for giving me hope, Friederike."

A few days later, the wall started to come down. Gilbert was the first who ran throw the open space, ignoring the pain and easily spotting the blonde hair, blue eyed nation he had raised.

Their union was a happy one.

As Gilbert hugged his Brüder tightly, red eyes glanced around and spotted a familiar smile.

Friederike smiled at him and his Brüder, happy they frond each other.

One day, Germans will feel that pride in them as the German flag is raised. They will not be afraid to show they love their country.
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Comments: 20

ladyblackbird13 [2015-07-01 13:50:30 +0000 UTC]

My mother's family is East-German and my granddad's still Prussian (my family's paternal part is british, though). Your story is awesome!

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moonfactored [2010-11-06 21:10:14 +0000 UTC]

So awesome!

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NanamiTe [2010-09-19 19:28:28 +0000 UTC]

wow thank you so much!
I'm German and my whole family is from East Germany. The name of my cousin is Friederike ^ ^
That touched me very much. Thank you. Now I think I can be a little more proud of my country.

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QueenOfPrussia In reply to NanamiTe [2010-09-19 19:54:44 +0000 UTC]

I adore the name Friederike!! ^^

The pleasure is all mine! The goal of this story was so people could fill even a little pride for being German. ^^

Thank you for reading!!

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NanamiTe In reply to QueenOfPrussia [2010-09-19 20:05:13 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it's a beatiful name! I call her Ike XD
And you reached your goal .

Thank you for writing!! ^^

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TrinHetalian [2010-09-06 20:53:15 +0000 UTC]

Ah, finally! A berlin wall fic where Preuben doesn't die~!
Danke for le aweosme fic~!
-clicks watch-

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kingdomheartslover10 [2010-07-30 17:10:52 +0000 UTC]

oh wow this is so deep. and you know its made me proud to be German myself. thank you for this, thank you so much.

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QueenOfPrussia In reply to kingdomheartslover10 [2010-07-30 18:47:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad I was able to touch someone with and make them pride of being German.

Thank you for the comment.

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kingdomheartslover10 In reply to QueenOfPrussia [2010-07-30 20:23:43 +0000 UTC]

it was my pleasure

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xXDarkSunXx [2010-07-28 19:11:03 +0000 UTC]

I really like this! It really says that we need to forgive, even if we can't forget, and make sure it never happends again.
I'm part German on both sides of my family so this really touches me.
Also the camps that were happening in WWII were kept secret from the Germans and when they heard about it they were horrified also if they put down the nazis in anyway you were put in prison or killed.
God bless the world and all its people.

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QueenOfPrussia In reply to xXDarkSunXx [2010-07-30 18:50:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! In school, I did a speech about this. Lots of countries have bad past (look at Russia, China and England), but we've forgiven or they're never brought up.

Hell, even some of the soliders didn't know what happened in those camps.

Germany raises it's flags in pride has filled me with so much pride and hope.

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Funky-P3t3 [2010-07-26 03:12:38 +0000 UTC]

; u ; <3

Germany IS a beautiful country. I'd love to visit it someday. :c


I really dislike it when people judge an entire country based on some history.. it saddens me.

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Obsessinator [2010-07-23 22:49:17 +0000 UTC]

ITS SO BEAUTIFUL AWESOME PRIDE

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TheFlyingPotatoes64 [2010-07-23 22:07:58 +0000 UTC]

This is so sad! I almost cried. Very well writtten.

=The*Flying+Potatoes(64)

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Freedraw303 [2010-07-23 16:29:25 +0000 UTC]

this is such a sweet story.
Great job

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Zuru-Kiri [2010-07-23 15:46:27 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! So lovely story and it...makes me so happy~!

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Tsuzune-chan [2010-07-23 15:25:54 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely...~

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chibikakashi2 [2010-07-23 10:19:25 +0000 UTC]

thats amazing! i love gilbert and ludwig! they are both so cute...

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FrancescaKitty [2010-07-23 04:33:22 +0000 UTC]

:3 I call my grandparents from my mom's side Opa and Oma. I'm American but my family from my mom's side is from Germany ^^ This is a nice story.

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nondescriptive [2010-07-23 01:42:46 +0000 UTC]

that was sweet.

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