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Remember! Retrospection time!
Hi! Next. Page 8. Read from right to left.
Sorry for spelling mistakes... Ah! Please, help me with my english grammar^^!
Enjoy!
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no it's ok i like all of it
it's the best doshinji ever
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Oh, this will hopefully get very interesting. I like how Hinata's hair is pulled back that way.
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Wymiękła! Ona wymiękła! ONA WYMIĘKŁA!! *Idzie szukać ostatków po szampanie z sylwestra*
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well i have been following this doujinshi and i'm loving every image of it! anyways, since you wanted help with english grammar, i could tell you some of the errors in this page...and they are:
1. In the first panel, when Naruto's talking, you should have put like this "And now, when every single one of my tries to bring Sasuke back failed..." because the way you have put doesn't make much sense at all! anyways, the rest in that panel is right.
2. In the second panel, it's "because" and not "becouse", and it's "always" not "alvays". If you mistyped those, please tell me so i can excuse myself...
3. In the third and last panel, it's "forget" and not "forgot". Again, if you mistyped it, please tell me, okay? Thanx.
Hope i could help you in the grammar...if i did, then don't hesitate in asking me for more help.
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you're welcome! 
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Twarz Hinaty w drugim kadrze jest dziwna
Poza tym wszystko OK
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Hinata ma dziwny profil na tym największym kadrze, jakby miała dwa podbródki, poza tym brak kopnięć
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Raz narysowałam idealny profil w notesie i go za chiny przekopiować nie potrafię
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*pat pat* też tak mam i strasznie mnie to wkurza...rysuje gdzieś na marginesie sliczny obrazek a potem na normalnej kartce to dupa >n<....
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Chciałam go wsadzić w miejsce Hinatki na '
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*w*
Soooooooooooooo cute X3
My Naruto is amazing *ççççç*
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welcome!and I love your story so far. Keep going!
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naruto+blush+hinata=INCONCIVABLE
somtin goods gonna happen
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Oh my God! Naruto is blushing!!!! This should be good...
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NARUTO IS BLLLUUUSSH XDDD
What happened between him and sasuke? O_o' not yaoi riight? XDD
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I <3 this new page!!! I <3 a lot of ur pages... ^.^
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nice though here some corrections from the loyal editor:
(1 spot: And now, with every of my attempts to retrieve Sasuke having failed...
I don't feel so sure about this anymore...
2 spot: S-Stop it Naruto!
3 spot: I believe in you, Naruto, and I always will! You are stronger then anyone...
You can do everything, if you want to...
I know it, because...
4 spot: For me, you are...
5 spot: Sorry, Naruto kun, I shouldn't be thinking like that... I thought I could forget...
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I don't understand what's in the first panel...
yay, Naruto is blushing!
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Well ... hym... Naruto remember, when Hinata told him that he is strong, but many loses with 'bringing Sasuke back to Konoha' caused that he don't believe in that anymore... (I fail to explain it well in english ...)
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I'm really liking this comic! ^^
Has anyone helped you with the mistakes?
I'll help you if someone hasn't already....It is kinda hard to understand what's going on in the comic...
Great job though! ^^
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It would be great if u could help me sometimes^^ Will you?
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Oh yeah! I'd be glad to! ^^
I'm going to be an English teacher someday, so I'll definitely help! ^^
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Some Grammar errors are sory- spelled sorry, and shouldnt has an apostrophe so that way it's spelled shouldn't. Great page! I hope I helped!
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