22PandaBean-89 [2015-04-27 11:58:11 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
This is really good! This piece is really nice to look at. You've captured Levi's expression perfectly. The saturation and coloring is also great, the lighting of the cape especially. The lack of background puts more emphasis on Levi, standing in the middle and the pose of the character is also great, even though its quite mainstream. The drawing however has multiple "scratchy" or "rigid" lines. It adds great texture to the piece though. I'm not sure if it was the look you were going for, perhaps to model the lineart of of Ishiyama's art style or if it just ended up like that. The lines of the cape in particular could be erased, to be more specific, the ones on the inside in the corner of the cape. Its not that big of a problem since the piece still looks great. Overall, just maybe work your lineart, great job!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Harribel55 In reply to 22PandaBean-89 [2015-04-27 13:41:35 +0000 UTC]
Looks good!~
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
RogueMercy [2015-04-27 12:04:51 +0000 UTC]
Nice work, keep it up!
R1NG0TEA In reply to RogueMercy [2015-04-27 15:57:21 +0000 UTC]
thank you!