Schoomdaddy [2006-05-18 12:10:55 +0000 UTC]
Very good. I didn't like the last two lines, but now I do, since its not a question Keep it up budding poet!
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homeonice [2006-05-17 15:50:07 +0000 UTC]
great poem. imagery was vivid and intense