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rabidguy β€” Soulcage
Published: 2006-05-17 14:25:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 92; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description In this room of brick and steel
I contemplate the world I feel
Inner light burning bright
Outer fire burning pyre.
Can it live outside this cage
Defying time and burning age
Or die beneath colossal gloom.
Lurking fetid β€˜neath the loom
Weaving fibres of sharp edged doom
Will it cut will I break
Or a future will I make
Dare I move outside this room
Free my soul and hope to bloom
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Comments: 2

Schoomdaddy [2006-05-18 12:10:55 +0000 UTC]

Very good. I didn't like the last two lines, but now I do, since its not a question
Keep it up budding poet!

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homeonice [2006-05-17 15:50:07 +0000 UTC]

great poem. imagery was vivid and intense

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