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toratamashii0986 [2012-04-28 19:55:26 +0000 UTC]
Does the queen know about rayna and her baby?
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Rotter12 [2012-04-28 16:00:43 +0000 UTC]
Called on the carpet is still called being "called on the carpet", whether its in an office or a garden. Methinks Sidhel's gonna be walking on eggs (no pun intended) for another scene or two here--as she's managed to get herself the defacto job of saving the Royal House the trouble of having heirs twice over. Makes her the problematical "Royal Consort" to Thier Royal Highnesses...
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hypnoslavelover [2012-04-28 15:21:47 +0000 UTC]
I thought she was supposed to being wearing one of those new uniforms for this thing; she still looks the same to me, except for the ropes around her arm. I stand corrected; a closer look shows it is a completly different material and style. Still, from what was said before, I'd of thought that her belly would be covered. But that Special Forces woman looks more like a Nazi between the hat, the expression, and the blouse style; she wouldn't happen to be a Purist would she?
You outta be a novelist with that talent for thickening the plot and building suspense without dragging things too much. So what is all this going to lead to, civil war? I kind of hope it does or at least to a major firefight.
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Rachel12 In reply to hypnoslavelover [2012-04-28 16:33:37 +0000 UTC]
I think the next part will make it much clearer who's in peril. Seemed that while many were thinking of the end, the rebuilding of the elven race. They forgot about the present politics.
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hypnoslavelover In reply to Rachel12 [2012-04-29 02:57:48 +0000 UTC]
That's not surprising. How many people want to be king, get the crown, and then don't know what to do with it? I see a lot of that in this sense. And I mean what I said, you should write a book or movie script.
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Rachel12 In reply to hypnoslavelover [2012-04-29 12:29:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. If your interested, I have written several stories, some are posted on fanfiction.net under the name rachel. (Yes, joined long enough ago to get my own name.) Any way, heres a link to one of my stories, called 'Assassin' [link]
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Rachel12 In reply to artguyjoe [2012-04-28 14:49:09 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, I had thought about it, but decided it would not go with the feel of the story and what the queen brings up about Sidhel in the next part.
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hypnoslavelover In reply to Rachel12 [2012-04-28 15:22:51 +0000 UTC]
I have to agree; if the queen got pregnant too, it'd throw things way off track.
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Rachel12 In reply to Rated123 [2012-04-28 11:58:22 +0000 UTC]
Well that was the plan...least with the Princesses...Reyna, was an accident, which from the next part I hope to show that it was a serious accident.
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