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Lukington17 [2019-03-31 00:33:35 +0000 UTC]
I remember this episode and how Trixie was like snacking throughout the entire thing, glad I wasn't the only one thinking about her insides...
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Bunblitz21 [2019-03-28 19:16:13 +0000 UTC]
a bit too graphic for my...."tastes" xD
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UgandaDoggy [2019-03-28 01:27:28 +0000 UTC]
Do Derpy vores The cutie mark crusaders
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Ry-BluePony1 [2019-03-27 20:45:20 +0000 UTC]
What a way to get revenge! I like it
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Ry-BluePony1 [2019-03-28 17:23:57 +0000 UTC]
Aww, darn. I was really hoping you could play as Trixie. Especially since Trixie is actually pretty easy to play. She’s cocky, boastful, and speaks in the third person.
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SwiftgaiatheBrony [2019-03-27 20:44:20 +0000 UTC]
Holy Christ or Sweet Celestia
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-27 20:43:02 +0000 UTC]
As Trixie poured the cinnamon nuts onto her tongue, her stinky breath washed over them in a hot and humid wave. They screamed as loud as they could, “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!” One Earth Pony Stallion screamed, “I DON’T WANNA BE EATEN!!!!!!!!” He screamed right as Trixie was closing her mouth, about to crunch the Cinnamon nut, “NONONO WAIT-“
(Maybe have her talk with her mouth full as she chews up the Cinnamon nut noisily?)
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Radiant-Sword In reply to BrandonTheBronyPony [2019-03-27 20:44:52 +0000 UTC]
"Mmm... Those nuts taste better than I thought." Trixie said in a mouthful as she chews up the cinnamon nut noisily.
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-27 20:51:02 +0000 UTC]
The Stallions screamed as they were thrown around Trixie’s mouth as she chewed up the Cinnamon Nut. Some were less fortunate, or more fortunate depending on how you look at it, and they were crunched between Trixie’s teeth, staining her teeth red. The taste of their blood was only slight, and was mostly overpowered by the taste of the cinnamon. Those that survived hung onto Trixie’s tongue for dear life, trying to clamber up the slippery mountain, but then the mush pushed them further back. One Stallion screamed, “NONONO PLEASE DON’T SWALLOW!!!! WAIT WAIT WAIT-“
(Maybe give her dialogue as she swallows them? And maybe she belches without saying excuse me? And maybe type out the belch? Like this: UUUURRRRP!!!)
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Radiant-Sword In reply to BrandonTheBronyPony [2019-03-27 20:52:57 +0000 UTC]
Trixie did a swallow before saying, "I'm glad we dealt with those clods." She then lets out a belch. "UUUURRRRP!!!"
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-27 21:07:22 +0000 UTC]
The other Stallions in the bag screamed as Trixie tilted it, about to pour some more Cinnamon nuts into her mouth.
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-27 21:09:33 +0000 UTC]
Trixie was unable to hear the screams of tiny Stallions as they fell onto her wet tongue.
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-28 02:47:08 +0000 UTC]
The Stallions tried pounding on Trixie’s tongue, but she couldn’t feel them.
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-28 15:55:05 +0000 UTC]
Trixie could taste a slight coppery flavor, unaware that it was the blood of the Stallions she was tasting as she crunched them.
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Radiant-Sword In reply to BrandonTheBronyPony [2019-03-28 16:19:25 +0000 UTC]
"Time to go home." Starlight said as she walked, "I'll be late for training."
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-28 16:23:27 +0000 UTC]
Trixie still had many cinnamon nuts left in her bag, with many screaming Stallions left inside, and Trixie planned to finish them off.
Many Stallions screamed as Trixie started to pour more Cinnamon Nuts onto her tongue, “TRIXIE PLEASE STOP!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO SEE US!!!!!! STARLIGHT SHRUNK US AND PUT US IN YOUR BAG!!!!!!”
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Radiant-Sword In reply to BrandonTheBronyPony [2019-03-28 16:31:33 +0000 UTC]
Trixie began to crunch on more nuts and stallions as she continued to ride on Starlight.
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-28 16:36:09 +0000 UTC]
(Maybe have her talk with her mouth full? Maybe make her speech look muffled by the food?)
The Stallions screamed as they tried to avoid the showmare’s lethal chomping teeth. Some managed to avoid them, while others didn’t, and were crunched Into bloody red messes on her teeth.
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-28 16:45:48 +0000 UTC]
(Like, if she were to say This is so good, she’d say Thish ish sho ghud. Or if she were to say something like You want some? She’d say “Yow wunt shum?” And she’d probably spit food while she talks. I don’t imagine her having very good manners. Starlight would probably tell her not to talk with her mouth full.)
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Radiant-Sword In reply to BrandonTheBronyPony [2019-03-28 16:56:01 +0000 UTC]
(Okay.)
"Thish ish sho ghud." Trixie said in a mouthful while spitting out food, "Yow wunt shum?"
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-28 17:01:10 +0000 UTC]
Starlight was getting annoyed by Trixie’s bad manners, but she was pleased as she thought about the Tartarus those Stallions were going through in Trixie’s mouth.
The Stallions in Trixie’s mouth tried leaving her mouth as she talked, but failed, and they ended up being pushed towards the back of her throat, as she was about to swallow the cinnamon nuts along with them.
(Maybe After she swallows, Trixie could mention how they taste different than usual for some reason, but then just shrugs it off?)
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Radiant-Sword In reply to BrandonTheBronyPony [2019-03-28 17:05:03 +0000 UTC]
After swallowing, Trixie began to shrug off. "Those nuts tasted different than usual for some reason." She said.
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-28 17:13:00 +0000 UTC]
There were a hoofful of nuts left in the bag, along with the last few flea sized Stallions. They couldn’t climb out of the bag due to it being too high, so they had no choice but to accept their fate as Trixie’s snack. They screamed as Trixie held the bag over her mouth, “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!”
One Stallion screamed, “I’M TOO YOUNG TO DIE!!!!!”
Another screamed, “I will admit I’ve always dreamed of being eaten by a Giantess Mare.... but I never thought it’d actually happen!! PLEASE DON’T ME!!!!!”
Her hot and humid Cinnamon breath washed over them, as Trixie was about to pour the last cinnamon nuts onto her mouth.
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-28 17:16:07 +0000 UTC]
They screamed as Trixie’s tongue opened up, as Trixie was about to dump the rest of the cinnamon nuts onto it, “NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!”
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Radiant-Sword In reply to BrandonTheBronyPony [2019-03-28 17:19:52 +0000 UTC]
Starlight looked at Trixie. "Jokes on you, clods." She said in a devious tone.
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-28 17:25:57 +0000 UTC]
The Stallions screamed as Trixie was right about to pour the Cinnamon nuts onto her tongue, “NONONO!!!!! WAAAAIT-“
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-28 17:41:26 +0000 UTC]
They screamed as some of them were crushed by her teeth just like the others, while others managed to avoid Trixie’s chomping teeth, and would be making the full trip down to her belly.
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-28 17:44:44 +0000 UTC]
Her voice was booming and deafening to their ears. They screamed as the chewed up nut mush pushed them to the back of her throat, as she was about to swallow them, and that would be the end of all the Stallions Starlight shrunk. They screamed as she was about to swallow, “NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!”
(Maybe after she swallows, she gives a massive belch, then pats her belly in satisfaction, with dialogue?)
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Radiant-Sword In reply to BrandonTheBronyPony [2019-03-28 17:50:22 +0000 UTC]
After swallowing, Trixie made a massive belch before patting her belly in satisfaction. "Aren't you glad Trixie enjoyed those nuts?" She said.
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BrandonTheBronyPony In reply to Radiant-Sword [2019-03-29 20:32:20 +0000 UTC]
Her belly gurgled and groaned, as her stomach acid began to digest the Stallions inside.
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