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theJfluffy [2019-05-08 04:28:47 +0000 UTC]

The water looks amazing!
Really love these type of minimal artworks!

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PeKj [2019-05-07 19:05:32 +0000 UTC]

The flowing hair is very good. The background color might be a bit too close to the hair color. With more contrast between the water color and the hair color the hair might be more noticeable.

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Nephterys [2019-05-06 01:16:17 +0000 UTC]

hi i'm from
Wow this is a stunning piece! I love the character design of the girl. she looks at peace, but also the scar reveals that she's been through a lot. I think the lily pads and the fish are a nice detail. they make the picture look more dynamic, but at the same time not too crowded. (also I love the way they don't stick out that much and actually interact with the character. especially the way the fish goes into her hair haha!)
one thing I noticed is the girl floating. I think if you'd've used different brush settings for the effect(for example I think watercolour would do the job) the water would've looked even better and more realistic!
also, I love the way you did the shading and highlights on the girl's hair, it looks amazing!
your anatomy overall is really good too^ but it'd also be nice to see you messing with the perspective: for example placing the shading differently, so it shows that the girls head is actually above the water, and higher than the rest of her body(since the only way you can tell it's higher than the rest of the body is because of the colours)
one thing I definitely recommend adding is shading to the girls face above the water^^
also, I love how you've made the picture into the shape of a leaf!
I think the face overall sticks out a lot, but this way the viewer knows what the focus on the picture is, so that's not necessarily a wrong thing, but it'd still be better to make the colours a bit more dull in my opinion^^
but well. other than the fact that I just said you could make the colours duller, I think the cold colour palette actually works well with the drawing, it sets a nice calming atmosphere!
well, I hope this made sense and I apologise if I critiqued it too harshy : o I think your drawing is really neat and I can't see more of your works!

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Sagana666 [2019-05-05 18:01:57 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I'm from the group projectcomment  

 To begin with, I've to say that it's difficult to criticize your piece since it's very inspired and well realized I relish the coloring and the composition of the work! I commend with you, it's surely inspired!

Just a couple of points: 

The scar look bi-dimensional and sticks out a bit. 

The face comes out very harshly differently from the lock of hair on the top of the image that smoothly emerge from the water. 

The lily leaf on the right that covers the breast give the false impression that the left breast is too high compared to the other.

As a matter of personal taste I would have concluded the top of the drawing with the end of her hair dropping out of the shape.

The Sternocleidomastoid muscle on the neck are a bit exaggeratedly emphasized.

This are just minor notes, if we have to be fastidious. Again, the piece is great, I wish you the best of luck with your works in the future

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Shakessart [2019-05-05 14:41:14 +0000 UTC]

beautiful illlustration

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