Comments: 364
CarolCaproni [2014-09-30 18:47:47 +0000 UTC]
A segunda é muito melhor em quase todos os aspectos. As pessoas só estão dizendo que preferem a primeira por ela ter saído com uma composição melhor: ela está mais equilibrada, por causa do formato das asas e do cabelo liso.
Outra coisa é a personalidade da mulher: a personalidade da antiga combina mais com o cenário e as cores utilizadas.
Os detalhes das plantas, as dobras do vestido, as cores das frutas, o cabelo, o sombreamento, os detalhes, a curvatura das asas, cada pena, o brilho visível da luz do sol por entre as nuvens... o progresso é visível, e o novo desenho é incrível
Não sei inglês o bastante pra escrever tudo isso que eu queria, então vai em português, mesmo... tenho fé de que alguém vai conseguir entender isso.
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KatrinaIorio [2014-06-26 18:35:35 +0000 UTC]
You've defiantly improved, but both drawings are amazing works of art! Honestly, ergoploxy couldn't have summed it up better.
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KatrinaIorio In reply to KatrinaIorio [2014-06-26 18:36:23 +0000 UTC]
You are an amazing artist ... Never forget that!! *thumbs up*
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calponpon [2014-06-04 06:19:41 +0000 UTC]
From a technical standpoint, the 'after' is much, much better IMO. The anatomy is better, the colours are varied a lot more making it look more crisp and less flat as the 'before'. Shadows are a lot more defined and realistic. Everything from the wheat, to the fruit, to the clouds is more detailed and less blurred out than in the original. So yeah, great improvement.
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AliceUchiha13 [2014-04-01 22:28:23 +0000 UTC]
While the firs tone was great, the second is just ADORABLE! <33
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JaredTheDragon [2013-12-19 23:16:46 +0000 UTC]
You've definitely progressed, but both are still great images! The anatomy issues aside, the first ain't bad. Your update however is just gorgeous, and I love the detailing!
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BlackBy [2013-10-14 15:29:25 +0000 UTC]
a very nice work !
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monkeynova [2013-08-24 05:09:17 +0000 UTC]
The second one shows obvious improvements, I'd say. However, I think the atmosphere is nicer in the first one - the wind in the wheat and the soft painting style
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Aywmi [2013-07-13 11:24:14 +0000 UTC]
Was you in the Japan Expo ? Cause I saw a wallpaper of this draw in
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deeclear [2013-06-10 05:09:55 +0000 UTC]
I like aspects from both pieces. I love the wings from the before but the clouds from the after. I like the dress and the way it looks as if it has depth and the bird from the after but the hair and the face from before. Since I don't know how to draw at all I love both pieces.
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Bean-Sprouts [2013-06-08 18:34:29 +0000 UTC]
I definitely like the before one better but you can definitely see the technique improvment on the after one. There's more attention to detail and skill but I think the softness is more fitting for this picture.
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SisterOfScarletDevil [2013-06-06 19:52:30 +0000 UTC]
I rather like both.... I like the softness to the first one, but something about the details and the brightness of the second pic draws me in.... Beautiful work! ^.^
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aliursa [2013-04-21 20:50:34 +0000 UTC]
O wow i can really see the improvement!! How long was it from the original that you drew from the newer version?
~Kay
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Luckyjinx15 [2013-04-11 19:34:08 +0000 UTC]
i like the former picture...she is prettier....but the later version is more realistic
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sage666 [2013-04-03 04:40:32 +0000 UTC]
They look so different it's hard to decide with one looks cuter. Both faces are cute in it's own way.
Everything else is waaaaaaaaaaaaaay better in the newer version though.
The details, change in character design, and especially the portrayal of depth.
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BloodWillow [2013-03-31 16:11:32 +0000 UTC]
Great work! The original was pretty good on its own, but you really improved upon it.
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Oh-My-Maple [2013-03-31 12:12:50 +0000 UTC]
Damn it... I can't even get to the level of the older drawing xD
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DeClaviLLe [2013-03-29 17:20:25 +0000 UTC]
its a great work of and old drawing
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Yuka-Strike [2013-03-24 02:27:29 +0000 UTC]
You are very talented. Wow. Good for you. Admirable.
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PiecesOfSteel [2013-03-23 21:40:24 +0000 UTC]
I actually prefer the newer picture. You have improved a lot with detail, shading. The biggest improvement are the wings since in the before picture, the anatomy of the wings are incorrect.
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lunatykpandora [2013-03-20 17:01:02 +0000 UTC]
I really admire this, especially because I'm stuck in the same situation - I feel like my skills have stagnated through lack of use lately, so in a way it makes me feel a bit better to know that even amazing artists feel this way. I can see incredible improvement in your skills from the previous piece to the newer one, though they are both lovely, I can tell that you have worked very hard to build upon and advance your techniques to create the style you have today. Colour me super impressed!
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Tobal-gz [2013-03-18 19:20:29 +0000 UTC]
Both are wonderful but the color values and your technique is inccredible on the second, Really amazing improvement.
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Charlene-Art [2013-03-17 11:26:26 +0000 UTC]
You were pretty good before. The highlights and the added detail in the after is awesome though.
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Meganze [2013-03-16 14:38:16 +0000 UTC]
I prefer the face and wings of the before picture, can you do a after-after picture?
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mouseanderson [2013-03-14 21:38:21 +0000 UTC]
Love both, but I do think the second shows a definate increase in ability.
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PandasAndKpop [2013-03-14 11:55:19 +0000 UTC]
I think they both look great!
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TigerOtter7 [2013-03-14 08:33:32 +0000 UTC]
the are both absolutely amazing, but the after is so much more amazing!
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inavacl [2013-03-08 21:06:16 +0000 UTC]
I love the improvement.
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ox-Honey-Bee-xo In reply to Radittz [2013-03-06 23:08:46 +0000 UTC]
Like I said, don't listen to them. People have their preferences of what kind of style they're into, and while they're free to like one drawing over another, to say that there's been no improvement is just a bold faced lie. If they actually looked over the drawings more carefully, they'd see drastic improvement in many areas. I mean, look at those wrinkles across her waist! And how detailed the wheat is at her feet. The ground and sky are separated now instead of being blended into each other, the dress is more detailed, her body has more of a shape to it, the wings are better (not because they're folded, but because they're much bigger and will be able to handle her weight now), the hair is more lively, the eyes more striking, and I could just go on and on.
Anyway, I'm glad my comment could cheer you up! You've made great progress between then and now, and I'm certain you'll only continue to improve with each artwork you create. Don't ever feel discouraged for any reason because you're a wonderful artist.
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estra-chan [2013-03-03 11:57:09 +0000 UTC]
też chcę któregoś dnia odkryć, że zrobiłam taki progress w rysowaniu włosów... @u@''
śliczna jest i koffciam to zboże <3<3
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extorSA [2013-03-01 09:45:03 +0000 UTC]
Stunning work!
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sherpaforce [2013-02-28 11:05:35 +0000 UTC]
What a breathtakingly beautiful piece of work!
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cheechy [2013-02-26 17:36:27 +0000 UTC]
I like the before more hehe
its very soft
the new one has a nicer dress but overall the before is better looking imo
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Oisin99 [2013-02-26 17:27:08 +0000 UTC]
Very nicely done
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kyrtuck [2013-02-25 20:13:09 +0000 UTC]
Yes, the hair, wings and clouds all look much better the second time around
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Rad-Pax [2013-02-25 10:22:40 +0000 UTC]
I like the one before for the soft shading, but the after has better anatomy
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miki-light [2013-02-23 06:09:33 +0000 UTC]
you've come so far :'S
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