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clockworkmonkey411 [2008-09-14 19:30:29 +0000 UTC]
That's a pretty good fur effect you have going there, although it's not wholly necessary. You could simply put a few outstanding tufts and leave the colors uniform. It's simpler and it does its job.
Lol Mephiles gots a big head
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Shrazer320 [2008-09-14 06:18:03 +0000 UTC]
Besides the sketch lines, it looks great.
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order67 In reply to RaeLogan [2008-09-12 03:41:46 +0000 UTC]
I dunno, but if i tried doing it that quickly, it would sure look like crap
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order67 In reply to RaeLogan [2008-09-13 03:36:56 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, the music i like is often incorporated into stories i write and other stuff i do, for example one of my chapters was titled "Waking up" which was loosely based on Waking Up by Julien-K. I do that even for school projects and stuff sometimes, music really inspires me.
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RaeLogan In reply to order67 [2008-09-13 05:02:58 +0000 UTC]
If you look at my chapter names, you can see what how some are based off of songs:
Coming Undone (Inspired by the Korn song of the same name)
Felt The Sun (A nod to Can You Feel The Sunshine?)
Just Push Away (Pushing Me Away Remix)
Faint (Linkin Park song)
I'm My Own Worst Enemy (Again, Linkin Park. The song is Given Up)
Nobody's Listening (Again... Linkin Park)
Then I work some inside jokes about some songs:
During the ending part of Chapter 5 of TD1, when Shadow falls into Rouge's arms, it's a nod to any version of Sweet Dream, more recently used in Sonic Next Gen with Akon as back up.
(True)
(Remix)
(Yeah)
(Come on)
(Yo take it all the way back down with this one)
(Step it up and keep it mellow)
(Come on)
(True)
We lay like lovers in a warm embrace,
(Lovers in a warm embrace) (Woo)
Your kisses thrill me like no one before,
(Eh) (Yeah)
Baby, I'm all yours. (Uh huh)
Living just for you. (Uh huh) (Uh huh) (Yeah)
I can see the moonlight shining through the mist.
(Shining through the mist)
The moonbeams playing over you and me. (Yeah) (Eh)
I see the light of love, (Uh huh)
Shining in your eyes! (Uh huh) (Oh) (Uh huh)
(Break it down)
Holding you in my arms. (Woo)
Loving you beneath the stars! (Woo)
I don't want the night to steal you away.
(Steal you away) (Come on)
Hold me close, I want you so.
Don't you know that, baby? (Woo)
Your love has touched my very soul.
Can you feel it baby?
Never let me go darling 'cause we're so in love.
(Yeah)
And we can dream on, (Yeah)
Sweet dream! (Woo)
(Bring it back down a little bit)
(Let's go)
Your shadow captured in the silent night.
(In the silent night) (Woo)
I feel your breath-it whispers like a breeze. (Eh)
Oh baby, please be mine, (Aha) (Uh huh)
Till the end of time! (Aha) (Uh huh) (Yeah) (Uh huh) (Yeah)
Holding you in my arms,
(Hold you in my arms)
Loving you beneath the stars!
(Beneath the stars)
I don't want the night to steal you away!
(Steal you away, steal you away) (Woo)
Hold me close, I want you so,
Don't you know that, baby?
Your love has touched my very soul.
Can you feel it baby?
Never let me go darling 'cause we're so in love
(Yeah)
And we can dream on, (Yeah)
Sweet dream!
Huhuh (Huhuh)
Huhuh (Huhuh) (Come on)
Huhuh (Huhuh)
Huhuh (Huhuh)
Huhuh (Huhuh)
Huhuh (Huhuh)
Huhuh (Huhuh)
Huhuh (Huhuh) (Haha)
Huhuh (Huhuh)
(So what)
(Oh what)
Huhuh (Huhuh)
Huhuh (Huhuh)
Huhuh (Huhuh)
(I find the lyrics on the web...)
Mephiles reciting lyrics from Animal I Have Become actually was very fitting on both parts. It applied to Shadow, whom he was taunting it with, because Mephiles was driving him insane. Likewise, it's a bit of a reference to the future stories, where Mephiles needs their help to tame and bring down the side of him that makes him a monster.
Originally, when Dark first appeared in story 2, he was going be reciting lyrics of "Pain" (By the same people who did Animal I have become) to try to break Mephiles. The idea was cut, but the song still made an appearance in Job Quest, where my friend's fancharacter was listing to it on her headphones.
The song Mephiles was hearing in the comic shop was Can You Feel The Sunshine... hinting the appearance of the Tails Doll might have been brought on by that.
The title of Chapter 16 of Relapse was very appropriate. "I'm my own worst enemy" was taken from the song "Given Up" by Linkin Park. The song talks about a guy that is unable to fight himself... and it seems like no one wants to help him until it's too late...
Nobody's Listening just seemed like a great one to help illustrate the point of the beginning of the story.
During She Shouldn't Have Come, Rae was humming "Valentine's Day" from Linkin Park. Though it's really a love song, I don't enforce a pair up between the two characters.
The song in it's whole can be found on one of my music videos: [link]
Very pretty and sad song...
......
That's all of the top of my head...
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Starprincess13 In reply to RaeLogan [2008-09-11 20:19:12 +0000 UTC]
No problem. ^^ how are the fan fics going?
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