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raemarshall — You Deserve Better

Published: 2009-04-20 05:08:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1218; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 131
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Description So he says that you're not good enough
(scars don't fade, scars don't fade)
the mirror whispers all your flaws
(never wake, never wake.)

So she says that you're not good enough
(take it all, take it all)
and you carved out all you had to give
(watch you fall, watch you fall.)

You Deserve
you deserve
you deserve better.

When you say that you're not good enough
thats the saddest pain I know.
because that will rip your heart apart
anywhere you go.

He is hurting, she wishes for love
and we all reach out to find
a reason that's inside ourselves
worthy of our time.


-self


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model- self.
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Comments: 8

dressONbackward- [2009-05-11 05:26:50 +0000 UTC]

your work has been featured!

here: [link]
thank you <3

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a-cat01 [2009-04-25 02:15:01 +0000 UTC]

poor thing great picture though^^

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GreEnieK [2009-04-21 18:41:56 +0000 UTC]

oh, poor girl, her lipstick had finished !)
nice ofcourse*_^

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raemarshall In reply to GreEnieK [2009-04-21 18:53:39 +0000 UTC]

ha thanks muchly dear

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Daspir [2009-04-20 16:04:08 +0000 UTC]

I heart the picture but I REALLLLY like your poem underneath.

YOU SHOULD MAKE THIS A SONG. I SERIOUS.
I think I might tweak the last stanza just a /bit/ though. I think you were on the right track of summing it all up.
the rest is perfection!

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raemarshall In reply to Daspir [2009-04-20 16:05:33 +0000 UTC]

um ha this is my new song I'm gonna do I just haven't recorded it. So tada!

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cleinahtan In reply to raemarshall [2009-04-22 00:50:35 +0000 UTC]

that's cool, do you have a page somewhere with your music?
either past music, or music that will be.

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DarklingLena [2009-04-20 05:33:44 +0000 UTC]

That's a sad picture.

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