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Published: 2012-01-06 19:43:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 1046; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 37
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Compositionally, this work is very well thought out. I love the fact that she's framed by the stone 'window' and it feels like she's seeking something in the bleak landscape. The colours are all managed very well. They feel like they belong together in one image.
However, I feel that there is room for improvement. Her shadowed back feels a little too 'flat'. There's not enough contrast in the lighter and darker shadows to give the model depth and dimension. I also think it's odd that there is a strand of her hair that is lighter than the rest of the shadowed areas. Yes, its posibble, but given its position behind her head, its should be more of a glow, rather than a definitve streak.
There's a part of the stone at the top of the image where the colours seem to have separated into a weird 3D effect (you can see quite clearly blues and reds overlapping) which makes the stone look badly extracted.
Other than those two relatively minor points, I do thinkthat this image is definitely very beautiful and has great potential.
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