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Published: 2010-06-10 18:48:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 839; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 10
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First sketch for my first comic, I will work over it and make it look better, ideas, suggestions, critics, are welcome as always.Angela and ValΓ©ria (c) to me
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I read the response on the left before I saw the question asked to the right. Might want to arrange that first dialog box higher to stress where the conversation starts.
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I meant in the last panel, of course, heh.
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Nice little sketchy. Personally, I like making comics, but decorations seem to be a problem to me. What you're doing is alright for a first go.
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LOL lover her tank top "I own a gun" XD thats awesome. and as for ideas suggestions critics ect. i really have none other then i know you will clean it up later. hmm oh wait well maybe add a plant or 2 by the table or the wall near the door cuzz it seems rather empty over there.
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Haha, thanks, I will add more stuff to the livingroom.
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