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ragados — Paranoia?
Published: 2003-10-07 19:39:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 220; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 33
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Description This is really rather shit, but I was a lot younger when I wrote it. comments are greatly appreciated because I would like to improve my poetry... a lot.
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Comments: 5

Itti [2006-11-23 20:32:04 +0000 UTC]

You should write more poetry.

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ragados In reply to Itti [2006-11-24 07:46:37 +0000 UTC]

Maybe, people don't tend to read it though.

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Itti In reply to ragados [2006-11-24 16:35:57 +0000 UTC]

You know I would.

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hauntedmoon [2003-10-11 06:58:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure....I kinda like it but it seems....choppy. But I like what it's saying.

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ragados In reply to hauntedmoon [2003-10-11 11:40:48 +0000 UTC]

Choppy? I know there is something wrong with it but I couldn't quite place it, also this is a really old poem so not exactly refined.

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