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Published: 2020-04-22 01:51:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 1332; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 22
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         “I can kill her now.”

         “No,” her father replied causing her to growl. “Their arrival was anticipated. The family would never give up searching for their sister. Fortunately, we moved our prisoner to another location with another warden. The advantage is we now know their futuristic technology cannot stand against you. This redhead is an element we didn’t anticipate. I don’t know who this person is…”

          “Does it matter? Twice nothing is still nothing. We should kill them now.”

          “And make them martyrs? No. We stick to the plan. We want them demoralized. That one’s daughter is the only person who can defeat you. Kill the mother, and you unleash a foe you never want to face. No. We let her live to spread the fear of this encounter to the others. Let fear be your weapon, daughter.”

           “So boring.” She leaned closer to the unconscious Star. “Next time…next time…”


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Comments: 30

MirrorKhaos [2020-05-05 21:22:36 +0000 UTC]

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RagingCyc0ne In reply to MirrorKhaos [2020-05-05 21:27:14 +0000 UTC]

it could, we can only hope

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MirrorKhaos In reply to RagingCyc0ne [2020-05-05 21:32:13 +0000 UTC]

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akizz [2020-04-24 14:46:15 +0000 UTC]

Very seldom seeing them like this

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RagingCyc0ne In reply to akizz [2020-04-24 15:01:32 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. You know it's bad when this happens

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dellcartoons [2020-04-23 22:18:40 +0000 UTC]

Emma is powerful


That makes her cocky


And that may lead to her downfall

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RagingCyc0ne In reply to dellcartoons [2020-04-23 22:35:56 +0000 UTC]

Except her father is right, there is only one person powerful enough to defeat her, Rebecca. Becca can beat her because her power is about controlling time itself.

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dellcartoons In reply to RagingCyc0ne [2020-04-23 23:34:33 +0000 UTC]

It's not always about power


Sometimes it's about being the main character, or the writer's favorite, or really, really popular

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RagingCyc0ne In reply to dellcartoons [2020-04-23 23:36:07 +0000 UTC]

now you're being meta











(but you're also right)

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Zomgzilla [2020-04-23 02:50:41 +0000 UTC]

Nice and sleepy probably very heavy to carry with all that armor though!

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RagingCyc0ne In reply to Zomgzilla [2020-04-23 02:55:39 +0000 UTC]

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thomvinson [2020-04-22 19:54:39 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, way effing cool! 

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RagingCyc0ne In reply to thomvinson [2020-04-22 21:20:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Just another foreshadowing scene

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thomvinson In reply to RagingCyc0ne [2020-04-22 22:35:02 +0000 UTC]

Most certainly sir! 

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FDComics [2020-04-22 18:58:55 +0000 UTC]

Eeeeeeeeekkk!!! Somebody stop them!

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RagingCyc0ne In reply to FDComics [2020-04-22 19:35:02 +0000 UTC]

And all the while Saucy and Sven have their own family issues

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FDComics In reply to RagingCyc0ne [2020-04-22 22:37:39 +0000 UTC]

Maybe they could trick Emma and Felicity into the same room and hope the problem solves itself

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RagingCyc0ne In reply to FDComics [2020-04-22 22:39:16 +0000 UTC]

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Cracoviia [2020-04-22 12:08:08 +0000 UTC]

Uh oh. That's the problem with magic, there often aren't many ways of coutnering it except for, err, more magic, unless the universe has some sort of anti-magic crystals or similar. All the fancy armour and weapons in the world can't help you if someone is powerful enough...


The magical effects on both our villains have come out well, especially the glow from Emma's hand illuminating the unfortunate Star.

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RagingCyc0ne In reply to Cracoviia [2020-04-22 15:00:37 +0000 UTC]

The thing with magic, for it to be quantified scientifically, it's a manipulation of energy in its various forms. Their suits are designed to counter most forms of energy and even tested with the help of Sorceress aka Alicia Dudley. Emma is just the strong where she can overpower the suits.


Thanks. Those effects are fun to play with from time to time.

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Cracoviia In reply to RagingCyc0ne [2020-04-22 15:21:11 +0000 UTC]

Ah, OK. That's the kind of in-universe detail that I like, in story settinsg magic can only really be stopped with other magic so that's useful to know in a universe like yours that mixes the two That's pretty much the same rules as mine.

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RagingCyc0ne In reply to Cracoviia [2020-04-22 15:33:04 +0000 UTC]

The Force in Star Wars is essentially magic, but it's all energy manipulation with substances used to counter or resist the Force. Even in Warcraft magic is seen as various forms of energy. Those are the references I used in my universe. Etyssa explains it in one of the earlier stories when she first meets with Ivana. It starts here:


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ronmarz1 [2020-04-22 08:57:55 +0000 UTC]

They definitely use a cheat code to power down the heroines high-tech battlesuits. 

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RagingCyc0ne In reply to ronmarz1 [2020-04-22 15:01:03 +0000 UTC]

Emma is just that powerful.  

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kenfusion45 [2020-04-22 04:00:57 +0000 UTC]

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RagingCyc0ne In reply to kenfusion45 [2020-04-22 05:17:26 +0000 UTC]

Not Emma, she's just that powerful

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kenfusion45 In reply to RagingCyc0ne [2020-04-22 12:50:44 +0000 UTC]

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RagingCyc0ne In reply to kenfusion45 [2020-04-22 14:50:59 +0000 UTC]

she is  

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nyctophobia11 [2020-04-22 03:04:33 +0000 UTC]

But now, they’ve lost the element of surprise.
He’s hoping the Tremaines’ haven’t read Dune?

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RagingCyc0ne In reply to nyctophobia11 [2020-04-22 03:24:53 +0000 UTC]

I don't know that it would help in this case  

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