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Published: 2016-03-24 21:15:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 3113; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 2
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Just a prototype of what could be one of my comix of JSR...Related content
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looks cool i live your art it always makes me happy
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Looks cool!
Maybe try playing with the spacing of the panels. When you place them very orderly it's clearer what's going on, but making them more uneven can make the page more visually interesting. It's a bit of a minor detail tho. 
You did a nice job on the anatomy and poses. Do you use references? I see you're already playing with line thickness, feel free to be a bit more liberal in using thick lines, it really makes thinks pop to the foreground.
Overall good job, and good luck!
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