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Published: 2008-03-14 19:35:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 172; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description I've just hit rock bottom hard, and don't know how to carry on.
It feels like my life has just been ripped from under me.
I can't stand anymore, it's time to face the truth.
Though my life has no meaning now,
There is one thing for me to come back to.

When my life is dark, you brighten my day.
When I need a hero, you're there to fight.
When all is lost. you go and find.
For the one thing to come back to
is you.

Trying to forget the bad, it's harder than it seems.
Going on from day to day, life still has no meaning to me.
I can't bear anymore, it's time for me to let go.
Though it would be best for me to die,
There is one thing worth living for.

When my life is dark, you brighten my day.
When I need a hero, you're there to fight.
When all is lost you go and find.
For the one thing to come back to
is. . .

~When my life is hell, you make it heaven.
When I'm hurt, you heal me.
When I'm sick, you cure me.
When I run, you find me.
When I'm chased, you hide me.
When I'm afraid, you protect me.
When I cry, you dry my tears.
When I'm to be killed, you save me. . .
from myself. . .~

I've just hit rock bottom hard, and don't know how to carry on.
Going on from day to day, life still has no meaning to me.
I can't stand anymore, it's time to face the truth.
Though it would be best for me to die
There is one thing worth living for. . .

When my life is dark, you brighten my day.
When I need a hero, you're there to fight.
When all is lost you go and find.
For the one thing to come back to. . .
is you. . .


I love you. . .
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Comments: 15

TheGodOfPower [2008-06-27 14:12:05 +0000 UTC]

You're getting very thoughtful in your writing
and this be'th the eveidence
tis very good
xXx

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Rain-Abm In reply to TheGodOfPower [2008-06-28 03:17:20 +0000 UTC]

THANKIES!!!!!!!!

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TheGodOfPower In reply to Rain-Abm [2008-06-28 19:36:31 +0000 UTC]

s'fine- loved it ^^

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dorkwithadream [2008-03-15 20:25:24 +0000 UTC]

omg tis gorgeous
lovely poem ^^

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Rain-Abm In reply to dorkwithadream [2008-03-15 20:31:23 +0000 UTC]

Thankies!

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Lala1010 [2008-03-15 17:34:50 +0000 UTC]

wow... that was really good amanda!! i didn't realize you could write that well.
is this going to be a song??

<3333 :thumb79975361:

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Rain-Abm In reply to Lala1010 [2008-03-15 20:31:09 +0000 UTC]

Thankies Lala!
Yeah it is hopefully going to be a song.
I need to write the music.
<3

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Lala1010 In reply to Rain-Abm [2008-03-15 22:08:12 +0000 UTC]

if ya ever need a flute for it.. hit me up DDD

that sounds SO COOL.

<333

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Raiku811 [2008-03-15 03:22:45 +0000 UTC]

tis nice tis nice

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Rain-Abm In reply to Raiku811 [2008-03-15 15:06:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you thank you

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Raiku811 In reply to Rain-Abm [2008-03-15 15:09:51 +0000 UTC]

no problem no problem xD

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Rain-Abm In reply to Raiku811 [2008-03-15 15:10:12 +0000 UTC]

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Raiku811 In reply to Rain-Abm [2008-03-15 15:21:47 +0000 UTC]

we have our own echo we have our own echo

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Birdman1 [2008-03-15 02:14:27 +0000 UTC]

awwwww, did you have any inspiritation for this?, or was it just becuz u felt like it like my stuff is? Either way I think this is very good I wish I could write like this!

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Rain-Abm In reply to Birdman1 [2008-03-15 15:09:23 +0000 UTC]

There was inspiration to it. . .
I just don't rember what it was. . .

Awwwwwz. . . Thank you <3

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