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Zombienvy [2016-09-07 02:13:01 +0000 UTC]

Hii!! Thanks for sharing this in my critique thread and sorry for the wait!

To start, I love the composition of this piece.  your position is super natural - specifically knowing that you are taking the photograph yourself.  
The silhouette is stunning, and the slightly arched shoulder and bent fingers give this a delicate feeling while still having tension. 

That being said, how clean these lines are, makes the frizzy-ness of the hair going down your back extremely noticeable.  Since you are working with photoshop or another photo enhancement program, why not clean them up just a little? The flower texture pack is super pretty and I like how the flowers are overlaid mostly only onto you. I almost feel like they are too vivid though, while the color is beautiful and compliments your natural red hair nicely I don't think it would hurt to make them slightly more opaque.  I'm curious if you played with opacity and if so, what made this your final decision. I think that the flower texture that is floating in the background like a reflection is slightly distracting and that by illuminating it you would make yourself a stronger focal point. 

Other than just a few cleaning techniques this is a beautiful shot!!
Thank you so much for sharing I hope this was helpful. 

 

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zero-scarecrow13 [2016-09-06 11:27:17 +0000 UTC]

so... beautiful ... °_°....

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Gibert [2016-08-04 08:37:57 +0000 UTC]

Blooming gorgeous!

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Sailormoonblackbutle [2016-08-03 23:40:28 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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Ouroboros-Armageddon [2016-08-03 15:27:33 +0000 UTC]

I like this one. The pink flowers go really well with your hair and the green lipstick you've used works compliments (or contrasts) the pink already established.

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