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Published: 2014-06-02 05:48:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 807; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Description Wanted to try a digital painting without lineart :3
And what's that in the distance- a background? Yup. Things just got real up in here

I didn't give the background much attention because I really feel like I'm not at the level in my ablilties where I can manage a detailed background along with a good composition (and I have tried, believe me) , not to mention that I still have trouble with lighting and form-shading So...I know this is far from perfect, but it's a start for me The only thing is, this painting kinda wiped me out, as far as arting goes, so I'll probably limit these kinds of paintings so that I don't get sick of them x') And I'm not abandoning my scrappy lineart xD cause I love cartoony things I'm just attempting to build my portfolio and branch out a little.
The one thing I wish I would have done is use some references...I mean I've seen plenty of art peices that involve a character standing under a canopy of trees with light shining on them, and that's something I've been wanting to depict for years, but I had no photo references for the light or her pose or even the "forest" (if I can call it that xD), so next time I'll try to use some sorry I'm just sort of brainstorming in this description

So anyway, here we have Kayanii, my rather shy Bosmer :3 This is her in Valenwood, actually, before she went to Skyrim. She's in her 30's in this picture, and she's a bit more bubbly than she normally is~ going to Skyrim and being in such unfamiliar settings reallllllly contributed to her already shy nature, and the handful of racist Nords complaining about Elves didn't help

I'd really appreciate your thoughts on this piece; where I can improve, what you think I did well, or could have done differently? It would be super helpful, and I LOVE constructive criticism Thanks so much!

Kayanii(c) me
Skyrim(c) Bethesda
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Comments: 26

Dusceja [2015-07-11 00:28:28 +0000 UTC]

I must admit, I really am in love with your designs No seriously, they are pretty creative and awesome <3 and the lightning is great! *^*

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RainSong777 In reply to Dusceja [2015-07-14 05:31:05 +0000 UTC]

aw, thank you! I'm glad you like them!!

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devijavi [2015-05-16 09:24:41 +0000 UTC]

Beauty has a new fom ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥




GAHHHHHHHH GODDAMNIT SKYRIM AND LOTR, NOW I HAVE A THING FOR CUTE ELVES

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Zosalot [2014-11-08 01:03:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh, er hair is so pretty! I love it!

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RainSong777 In reply to Zosalot [2014-11-08 03:34:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Midgellyfish [2014-07-15 13:16:28 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely amazing!

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RainSong777 In reply to Midgellyfish [2014-07-15 17:56:29 +0000 UTC]

sdafsadfgah stahpit you x)
thank you so much for your encouragement *hugs*

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Midgellyfish In reply to RainSong777 [2014-07-25 11:18:31 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! It's well deserved

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BlipBlipBlue [2014-06-03 21:58:13 +0000 UTC]

wooaaaaaaa *A* i'm awe struck! This looks aMAZING

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RainSong777 In reply to BlipBlipBlue [2014-06-04 05:52:07 +0000 UTC]

dafdsafgah thank you so much! >u<

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LadyMetaRose [2014-06-03 03:59:24 +0000 UTC]

You and your hair!!!!! I just love it! She looks amazing!

I like your attempt with the background. Lighting effects like that are hard (and seriously, have you seen my digital backgrounds? ) I think maybe have fewer openings in the canopy would really make Kayanii shine.

The only other point of concern is I think her arm nearest the viewer looks a little... off. I thought at first it seemed short, but maybe it's just the hand isn't as firm on the hip as I'd like. (if that make any sense.) 

Still! Lovely job on your shy, rule-breaking Bosmer.

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RainSong777 In reply to LadyMetaRose [2014-06-04 05:50:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!
Lol yeah, I totally see what you mean; I thought her arm looked the wrong size as I was painting but I was like "well it's too late now" x') Thank you so much for the help! I really appreciate it

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LadyMetaRose In reply to RainSong777 [2014-06-04 12:24:58 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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orokay [2014-06-02 22:33:12 +0000 UTC]

ajsdklfjds She's so pretty!! ლ(´◉❥◉`ლ)

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RainSong777 In reply to orokay [2014-06-04 05:48:00 +0000 UTC]

  Thank you so much Oro x'3 lol that emote

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Vearce [2014-06-02 14:19:48 +0000 UTC]

Looks awesome!

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RainSong777 In reply to Vearce [2014-06-04 05:48:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Vearce In reply to RainSong777 [2014-06-04 11:35:19 +0000 UTC]

Yer welcome!

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SereglothIV [2014-06-02 11:33:26 +0000 UTC]

I like the picture. The background looks good like it is, it's Kayanii who's important in here, isn't she?
That shades of light on her look a bit strange, but often when I draw something, even from a photo, I can see that some things look strange, but that's how they actually look on the photo, so... For sure you did much better than I would.
But besides that, the picture's awesome. I hope it was constructive criticism.
Good to hear that you're not abandoning your scrappy lineart. I love your cartoony things too!

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RainSong777 In reply to SereglothIV [2014-06-04 05:45:49 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you, yes that helped! I'll definitely use a reference next time:>

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JenniferO77 [2014-06-02 08:21:01 +0000 UTC]

I love how the light drifts softly onto her face like that, this is very good

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RainSong777 In reply to JenniferO77 [2014-06-04 05:44:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you dear!!

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JenniferO77 In reply to RainSong777 [2014-06-04 08:48:48 +0000 UTC]

No problemmm

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Spicy-Porcupine [2014-06-02 06:20:48 +0000 UTC]

Looks amazing!

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RainSong777 In reply to Spicy-Porcupine [2014-06-02 06:24:13 +0000 UTC]

eeeeeee thank you!! *u*

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Spicy-Porcupine In reply to RainSong777 [2014-06-02 06:31:37 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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