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Published: 2005-02-28 00:53:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 66; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description And I'm walking by
Dying neon signs
That glow like stars
In some lonely girl' s eyes

And I think that I
I'm gonna be alright
Just don't say anymore
Utterly cute things

Or I'll sew your chapped lips shut
Cause I just can't take
The pain of knowing
You never wanted to hurt me

And it's taken me awhile
But I've moved on
And he's the opposite of you
Formed from your flaws
And made into positives

He gets nervous around me
Who knew that I
Could make a boy feel that way?
You' ve taught me otherwise

And he doesn't try to act too tough
And he doesn't dress sexy in androgyny
He really just is who he is
And I don't remember the last time I' ve seen that

And it's taken me awhile
But I've moved on
And he's the opposite of you
Formed from your flaws
And made into positives
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Comments: 4

canadium [2005-03-11 04:26:52 +0000 UTC]

This is one of the better pieces of writing I've seen on deviant. Nice one, kelly. I didn't even know what the hell adrogyny was.

I imagine that would be tough to sing though. Formed from positives seems difficult to match a rythm to.

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rainyguitardays In reply to canadium [2005-03-12 03:33:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Haha.

Well, you see, I'm a beastly songwriter so I pull it off. *brush the shoulder off*

Only not.

I don't know. It wasn't too hard to write on guitar.

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rainyguitardays [2005-03-08 02:49:31 +0000 UTC]

It also takes a stab at the asshole I used to like who wore eyeliner because he thought it made him cool. Ugh.

Thanks.

Oooh, I don't share the music I write. It's so nerve-wracking and scary.

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SuperegoAngst [2005-03-07 16:59:30 +0000 UTC]

I like the line
"And he doesn' t dress sexy in androgyny"
because it takes a stab at metrosexuals, and that's always a fun thing. Hahaha. It's good, I like it, and would like to hear the song to go with it.

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